IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 455

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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As well as making money,businesses have social responsibilities,Do you agree or dis agree?

In the modern era, business play a vital role in our society , which has a huge part in country's economy so some responsibility up individuals to them. In my opinion , please statement is extremely right and they should be doing it.

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After being punished, many criminals continue to commit crimes. Why do some people commit crimes even after having been punished? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem.

A lot of criminals who were previously convicted of crimes and served judicial punishment are still involved in criminal activities mainly due to a lack of rehabilitation and influence from other criminals in prison. This issue can be mitigated by providing essential social training in the lock-up along with regular supervision from government officials.

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In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Nowadays, there are numerous concerns that parents struggle with in terms of how they should treat their juveniles. In this essay, both drawbacks and benefits of asking children to work hard to achieve whatever they want will be discussed.

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Recent advances in information technology have made communication between people a lot easier. However, these advances are negatively affecting human relationships as people spend less time in the company of others. Discuss the causes and suggest some solutions for this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Have you ever pondered what a day without your phone, laptop, or other technology might be like? We frequently view technology as an integral part of our life and attribute these advances to humans. There is an opinion, however, that "people change technology daily, but technology also changes people's life." Is technology increasingly influencing and guiding not only individual behavior and habits, but also those of communities or generations?

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Recent advances in information technology have made communication between people a lot easier. However, these advances are negatively affecting human relationships as people spend less time in the company of others. Discuss the causes and suggest some solutions for this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Have you ever wondered what life would be like without a phone, laptop, or other technology for a day? We often see technology as an essential part of our lives and think these changes are due to people. However, there is an opinion: "People are changing technology every day, but technology is also changing people's lives." Is technology increasingly dominating and orienting behavior and habits not only of individuals but also of communities or generations?

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that which is the better way to deal with troubles, accept it or overcome it? I strongly believe that two means are equally important.

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It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

it is believed that the extinction process is a normal thing in natural occurance and it will be pointless if we try to prevent this phenomenon. In my way of thinking I disagree with this view. In this essay the potential reasons for disagreeing with this will be elaborated and further explanations will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.

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After being punished, many criminals continue to commit crimes. Why do some people commit crimes even after having been punished? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem.

Recently a growing number of crimes are seen in the media committed by former prisoners. To protect innocent people from these harmful crimes, there must be actions to stop these criminals and help them not to make another mistake. Let us delve deeper into this issue in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Many countries today are expecting high level of migration from rural area to cities what are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers?

Nowadays, everyone want to lives in the urban area due to the some basic facility in many nations. This essay illustrates the causes of this statement and solutions for it.

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Compare the ownership variation of electrical appliances and give your opinion .

The given line graph compares the amount of bought electrical appliances and the total hours spent on housework per week in a particular country from 1920 to 2019.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

There is an ongoing debates between quality of work and professional appearance. Some organisation think that dress appropriately is a necessity to maintain smart working appearance. While, the others think that it does not matter as long as the employee produces high quality work.

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with the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. what solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

With the rapid development of social media platforms, youngsters have been overexposed to society making them potential victims of cyberbullying. Hence, in my opinion, parents must take control of the situation by applying solutions like activating parental control systems and educating their kids to get protection while interacting with the systems.

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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem.

In contemporary day ,a highly controversial issue whether relating to the phenomenon of wild animals extinctions , therefore some people believe that there are many reasons behind that .In this essay Im going to examine the phenomenon from both viewpoints and I will support my ideas with real_relavant examples.

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Cyclistis and car drivers sgaring the same roads cause some problem what are the problem and what can be done to reduce the

As we know, the cyclist and four wheeler share the same roads which can cause some of the troubles. this essay is an attempt to discuss the cause and the solution of this given notion along with the suitable measure to combact it in the subsequent paragraphs prior to the meaningful conclusion

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A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that modern countries are those that have citizens from different nations. When it comes to me, I agree with the aforementioned statement due to two facts which are; that dissimilar nations mean odds minds, as well as, it aids learning from one another. The reason why developed countries are the ones that include odds nations will be highlighted in the following lines.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe, that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people assume that parents are responsible to guide children to be excellent members os society. However, others believe that school is the place to learn this.

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Some people think that children should be punished when they commit a crime. Some others think that their parents should be punished. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, in modern era crime are increasing day by day. Teaching are play important role human life. Some children are starting crime in elder age because their parents are not strictly with children. Some individuals believe that parents should be punished if children do any crime. while,other think that children should be punished they commit a crime.I will discuss the both view of points in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a countries success, while others think that other factors can be used to measure a countries success. What are these Factors? Which do you think are most important?

A section of society is of the opinion that the growth of the economy is the sole medium to calculate the success of a nation whereas others opine that other elements are vital .The elements are food security and health care which ensure its success of it.However,I believe the former is the most significant of them. This essay will explain in detail the factors as well as the most vital to calculate successful of a nation in the subsequent paragraphs with examples .

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it is important for children to learn the diffebce between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Learning the difference between right and wrong for children at an early age is a fundamental skill. A punishment can be a way to teach them to be better generations in the future. I completely agree with this idea.

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"Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay"

Everything has two sides and teaching by teachers is not an exception. In the ,past it seemed like most people prefer studying on their own without any teachers,but today many people criticize it.

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