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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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demand for food is increasing worldwide. what is the cause of this? what measure can the international community take to meet this demand?

Groceries market is growing rapidly, all over the world, people require more and more. Many factors caused this issue and with no doubts the proper measures need to be taken by the society.

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It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, education is developed a lot to follow the recent lifestyle. Some citizens prefer to live in academy instead of living at home with their parents. In my opinion, I support the idea that living in school has more advantages than living in their own home.

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in the past, most people used to travel to their place or work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development ?

Since the 4.0 revolution broke out, the ultilization of smart devices has expanded dramatically, henceforward issued a new terminology : work from home. In such a turbulent 2020, typically the outbreak of covid19, working from home is obviously the effective method of social distancing. With the use of internet, no longer is distant working a problem since workforce could be supervised from afar. Thus, petrol expense could be economized and traffic congestions could be decreased. Moreover, ...

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones, and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

In the world of 21st century, overpopulation, mainly in urban areas has caused tremendous problems, due to this people are facing huge difficulties like it could be anything and this difficulties has caused serious problems. One should suggests various ways to deals with this kind of problems to various public authorities and individuals of that areas.

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Some children start school at 7 while others start school at 4. Does starting school at a young age have more advantages than disadvantages?

I am writing this letter of introduction as part of my application to MLPIMG program. I am passionate about family physician as it fits my interests, experiences and personality well. Your program appeals to me particularly due to the need to work in rural areas and the one-year training that will make me more familiar with the expectations of the health care system in Manitoba.

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The society in which we are living has growing trend to watch movies and television programs. People seek enjoyment and relaxation by observing electronic media. In my opinion, Government should check the level of violence in movies and other electronic media programs because every scene puts some imprints in the brain. These pictures stay in memories and give impact on personality.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Nowadays, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming a hit with the masses. It has captured the interest of people across all ages, genders and all walks of life.

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Is Logan fairly represented in the media, or does the media disadvantage people of the community through prejudice and reinforced stereotypes?

"Our position between Brisbane and the Gold Coast, combined with our connectivity and our diverse, professional community, provides us with a forum to success in our potential as a creative, vibrant future region" (CEO Silvio Trinca Region of Logan, 2018). The Logan City population is over 313,000 in 2018 with 217 different cultures and around 50 per cent of residents aged 30 or younger (Logan City Council, 2018). The Members of Logan are divided on the issue of community representation in the media, i.e the media are prejudicial to the community to portray Logan as one of the worst suburbs to live and work in. Due to the fact that the media has portrayed Logan City on the basis of stereotypes and discriminatory attitudes toward Logan City, and it’s focusing only on certain people. Therefore, the media has disadvantaged Logan's representation.

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Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers? What the cause of this? Solutions?

Use of technological gadgets is in the important section of the society is continuously on the increase. Some people advocate that old generation in the society wrestle with this facility like usage of telephones and internet. This essay delineates the causative factors and the methods to alleviate them.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

It is not an easy job for parents to raise children, specially when they are growing up and gradually form their personality. As a matter of fact, some people think that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters will results in a society of selfish persons. Whereas other believe that children should be allowed to make decisions about things that influence them. This essay will discuss both sides of this argument in detail.

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Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People fleeing devestation should be taken under the wings of developed nations, who are capable of sparing essential resources such as shelter and food. I greatly agree with this statement.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

Nowadays it is very common that people don't follow a single profession, like in the old days they spend their whole life working on one job. In the modern world, people do multiple jobs to earn more for a comfortable and luxurious lifestyle, so we need to know more about another subject of fields for a better outcome in the future.

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Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Read my sample answer for this question here.

Films are the important way of entertainment. It is said by some individuals that people should see all kind of international films in order to increase their knowledge , while others believe that it can have adverse effect on people .In this easy I will discuss both side of argument in the aforementioned paragraphs

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Overpopulation is serious issue of concern in developed and developing countries. It has lead to many other problems in the nations. I will elaborate my viewpoints in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. Others say that other factors are more important. Do you think that people can only be happy if they have a job they really enjoy?

Some people think that we can only be happy if we have an occupation we desire, while the others believe that other factors are far more vital. The question that happiness depends whether on favourite jobs or other factors is controversial.

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Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?

Food is the basic necessity of life. These days demand for food is increasing day by day and there are numerous reasons behind this. I will elaborate causes and measures which can be elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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12. Some people believe that success in life depends upon hard work and determination, while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance are important

Everyone wants to become successful in life. In order to achieve success in life everyone make efforts in their life .It is said by some individuals that in order to become successful in life a person should be hardworking and determined towards his goals. While other believe that money and personality of people is more important and both the viewpoints will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

When candidates apply for a job, to know more detail about the application, besides information on their resume, employers sometimes ask for some personal information. Of course, personal information have to be agreed to share and not too strictly confidential. In this idea, I totally agree with this topic.

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In modern, cohabitation is considered a new trend among couples. Do you think its advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Today there are many couples living together before marriage. This kind of relationship may end up with success and or failure. I think that the disadvantages of cohabitation are more than the benefits.

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Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?

It is true that even though bikers are friendlier to the environment, the popularity of bicycle users is not high. This states of affairs can be attributed to several factors and this essay will suggest several viable solutions to remedy the situation.

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