IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 8

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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robots and AI are being replaced humans in the workplace Why this happening?

In the digitial age, modern technology such as robots and AI are being innovated to alter humans in the workplace. This writer of this essay believes that competing between many countries in the world is burgeoning in developing rate in technology whilst this also have a benefit in improving global economy.

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Robot and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

AI and robot are now being upgraded for being used in workplace instead of human. In the light of this, the author contend that this phenomenon takes place due to the increasing demand from the public in life quality and is a positive changes as it promote global development.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to repace human in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

In the modern places, technology devices and robots are being developed to work instead of human in the workplace. The writer believe that have more and more serious impact on society.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the work places. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a possitive or negative impact on society?

In today's digital age, there is a rise in robots and AI technologies which are being created to replace people in the factory. This writer believes that this is a negative development due to bringing unemployment issue into a work place and danger of AI.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replaced in the workplace. Why isnthis happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact in society?

In the digital age, people seem to consider robots and artificial intelligence in the future and have developed further . This essay will outline the reason why this happening and why this tendency will have negative effects.

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Nowadays, more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same job. What problemes does this came? What are some possibles solutions?

In recent years, more and more older individuals who are searching for work need to compete with young individuals for the same occupation. Due to this trend, the majority of seniors are struggling with getting a job and it also fuels employment competition. However, this problems can be alleviated by enlightening the elderly and securing vocations only for them.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situations?

An increasing amount of people who are the best on their jobs, such as doctors and tutors, are leaving their own poorer countries to work on the developed continent. In my opinion, it is not good. Because the economy of poorer countries can be decreased. And that is why, government have to raise up salaries for professionals to solve this problem.

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When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time in. To what extent do agree or disagree?

In this day and age, public parks and sports are important. However, there is a more persuasive argument that in my opinion, shopping malls are equally crucial , I will shed light on my viewpoint in the following essay.

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Many people belies that glabad environmental problems Should be deal to with internationally rather than domestically → what is your opinion.

It is undeniable fact that compared to old era , modern period is now facing problems of global warming due to evolve in technology A majority of individuals believe that environmental problems must be dealt on international level rather than locally . Hence, I agree with this view of people and my stance is further discussed in upcoming paragraphs with suitable examples and explainations.

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Most modern families have both parents working as a result children spends less and less time with their parents. What is the reason for this ? What problems this cause

→ In modern period, a lot number of new age farsilies have both father and mother doing job .Therefore, children are not able to spend time with their parents which can cause major problems .so, the following paragraphs will include the reason behind this action taken by modern parents as well as some trouble which can be caused with appropriate examples and explanations.

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Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve sales of products that people do not really need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many individuals think that the main reason of safe and advertisement during people demand. In my opinion, I not agree with this statement, because it will bring a lot of discussion and negative effects.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

It is reasonable for some people to suppose that experts including doctors and engineers should put effort in working in the nation where they received education while the other think that professionals are able to choose workplaces freely.

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News editor decide what to to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we bacame used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

What news printed in the newspaper and broadcast in the television it decided by the news editors. The factors influence that kind of decisions are differences between news, and the topic of news. I think we are not used to bad news because its news repoters duty what the things going they had captured. Besides, it will definitely better if more good news were reported.

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Today's school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that in todays rapidly changing world, the importance of teaching financial literacy in educational organisations cannot be overstated. I strongly agree with the given opinion, as students will learn how to be financially stable throughout their lives and make effective financial choices.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both view and give your opinion

İn today's education systems students are taking range of different subjects many univeraity students are willing to derive knowledge from other subjects which are not the major ones. However other individuals consider that they should be fully focused on their main subjects for a qualification.I believe that students can learn about additional subjects if they want.

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robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

In digital era,most people believe that their jobs are being replaces by the development of robots and artificial intelligence in many workplaces.The writer has a strong concept about benefits which bring for human when use robots to do hard work instead human and these measures can increase the rate of producing efficiently.

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It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is prevalently witnessed that taking dangers in both their professional lives and personal lives. From this aspect, questions about whether this phenomenon is a positive or negative development are raised. In my opinion, taking risks in both their professional lives and personal lives is optimal.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In contemporary society , the methods of doing physical games is widely debated. It’s argued that joining team sports bring residents several benefits participate in individual physical activities . The following article will clarify there statement

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

These days the amount of violence in media is grown. While some people argued that Violence on both television and in computer games has uneffectiveness factors on the community, others believe that there are on drawbacks of this on the characterstics and behaviours of people. In this essay, I will discuss the negative effects of media on people. In my point of view, I am strongly agree with the first part of the arrgument.

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Some people believe that having sports in schools is a waste of time and resources, while others believe that sports in school are a vital part of education. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

We have been discussing this issue, whether physical education is needed in the school system or not.

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