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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that individuals are more and more dependent on each other. Others, however, believe that individuals are becoming more and more independent. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There has been much discussion on whether people are more dependent than the past. Some people think that people are more independent, but the others don't agree it. In my opinion, nowadays people are more focus on own life. In this essay, I will discuss the both views.

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Many students find it harder to study when they are in university or college than when they were at school. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve the problem?

Nowadays, many university or college students think that they can't study so hard like study at high school. There are many reasons for this problem. In this essay, I will analyze why in it, and what can we do to solve them.

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The main purpose of university is to provide graduate with the knowledge and skills needed for students to get a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

University provides knowledge and skills at all students which is the most important thing for graduation. Then, the main purpose to go to university is to get a good job after it. In this essay, I will explain which are advantages or disadvantages to go to university. Nevertheless, in my opinion it is a benefit to graduate for reach a better job, in fact, in Europe the people who have a master degree have a higher income of whom doesn't have it.

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Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Age to start study for children and how long the children could enjoy stay at home and play has been debated in years. While some people believed learning can be start as soon as possible, others believed children should enjoy their early age by exploring and play until six or seven years old. This essay will discuss both views and writer opinion.

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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The conveniece foods have become a fad for the citizens around the world, especially the the metropolis. Here, I would like to explain why it is a double-edged sword and the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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Recent technological developments have greatly changed our ways of life in a positive way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today era, technology plays an significant role to the development of country. It has updated and impacted the people lifestyle in a positive manner. In my opnion it has both positive and negative effect that will discuss with explanation in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's globalised era, migration for employment has become a very part of our lives. People often migrate from their hometows to different areas or even coutries for a bright future. While this trend offers several advantages like better career opportunities and a good lifetyle, it also comes with some disadvantages like isolation from the family and emotinal stress. In my opinion, the benefits of moving from one place to another outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that, these days, A few people think that the most suitable age to marry should be at least 21. At the same time, several people support other ages, such as under 20 or over 23. The question is : is there a specific age to hold the family responsibilities?. This essay completely agrees with this perspective.

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As computers are being used more and move in education. There will soon be no role for the teacher in classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the coming years, tutors will be replaced by advanced technology like smartclass, artificial intelligence, etc. As a tech-savvy person, I believe this is irrefutable and agree with this notion.

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the most imprtant aim of science should be ro improve people's live. to what extent do agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no denying the fact that sciences play a crucial role in human life. While it is a commonly held believe that the most essential role of science would be to facilitate individual lives, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I believe that a knowledge goal is to boost people lives.

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In many countries, it is mandatory for school children to wear uniform.Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?Five reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

This days around the world in many countries it is mandatory to be obligatory for school students to wear the school uniform. Like boys, school uniform has both positive and negative sides. In this essay I will examine sides of school uniform and try to draw some quick conclusion.

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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for students, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion..

It is often argued that games are very important part in the academic life of the learners. However, others think that sports should be optional. This essay will discuss both the opposite options, as far as I am concerned I favour the former viewpoint.

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People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

Globle warnings are the epicentre of discussion nowadays in an international form. It is an irrefutable fact that problems are rising day by day. While some people think that the government should increase the price of fuel can solve these enviornment problems. I will shed some light on my viewpoint. This essay shall discuss the actual problem and its cause.

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Today, newspapers and televisions are giving detailed descriptions on crimes. Some people believe such a practice will cause bad consequences and thus media should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that media explaining everything about the crime could result in bad effects and therefore media should be limited. I completely agree with this statement because this could create a bad influence on people and also normalizes thinking of illegal activites among public.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some regions, such as some asia countries, like Japan, China, children are often taught that they can achieve any goal as long as they devote enough hard work. In my opinion, this can transfers positive views and benefits their development. However, it may has also some downsides, such as losing their happiness in life and the oppotunities finding their real interest.

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Some people say newspapers are the best source of information but others say that the Internet is better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a debate over how the community can be conscious of the information. While some saying that paper are the best way for newsreaders, with some arguing that internet is optimal way. In spite of the fact that, paper bring more dependable information, I believe that Internet is reasonably the best option.

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Some people say newspapers are the best source of news, but others say that the Internet is better. Discuss bath these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say newspapers are the best source of information but others say that the Internet is better.

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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions difficult such as sahara deseret or the antartic .what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

Nowadays, people love to visit new places due to the curiosity to know about a particular place whether the living conditions are suitable for them or not. This essay will discuss the key advantages of travelling to place where an environment is harsh to live along with their disadvantages in the following paragraphs.

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While international tourism offers many advantages and a lot of places, it brings about several disastrous on both people and the environment there. Do the advantages of tourism outweigh disadvantages?

It is argued whether the tourism offers the advantages or have negative effects on both people and the nature . I will try to have further discussion on these topic .

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Advertising is commercial promoting to different kinds of objects. discuss both views

Advertising is commercial promoting to different kinds of objects. Some people say that advertising is affect significantly to persuade people to buy things. At the same time, others think that we do not pay attention to advertising. This essay will discuss both views, clarify my opinion and examples.

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