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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Overpopulation of urban areas led to numerous problems . What are the problems faced by urban people due to overpopulation ? Suggest ways by which governments and individuals can tackle this problems ?

Population explosion is one of the unfavourable factor in the world. There are many harms due to dense population in the modern regions. It is cause less of the business opportunities for public furthermore, governments reduce their attention of other regions.

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Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of newspaper?

There is no denying the fact that reading and watching news is a popular habit between people all around the world. This essay will discuss the accuracy of the news, and the main function of the newspaper.

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In many parts of the world, women study science and technology, but donot work in these fields. What measures can be taken to encourage women to work in science and technology?

It has been seen that many women educate themselves in science and technology, yet choose different careers for work. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening and put forward several measures for this issue.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that manners should be taught to children by family while other believe that school is the only place where good behaviour can be learnt. While it is undeniably true that teachers and other students can help nuture children in proper way . I firmly agree that education begins at home and can be taught easily.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge

There is no denying the fact that young students demand a high pressure while they study academic lessons beside other non-academic lessons, so it is a good solution to remove the non-academic from timetable of schools. As a result, they increase their attension on essential subjects. There is an opinion that contradict this. In my opinion I believe that the non-academic subject provide a lissure to the students and it is not a good idea to remove that lessons.

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Some people believe that women should be able to join their country’s army and police forces, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays people divided in opinions, while some think that women should have equal rights with men to have an ability to join military and police, others believe that those professions are more suitable for boys rather than girls. I strongly believe that ladies should be equal with men and be able to join any profession they want. In this essay let us discuss both sides of this argument and reach a reasonable conclusion.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays many parents in different countries choose to educate their children in home by themselves instead of sending them to regular school with teachers and students. In my opinion , this is a negative trend and it has a lot of drawbacks . This essay will explains my reasons of my opinion .

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Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphone and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions.

In recent years, the obstacle of using modern technologies has emerged as a significant challenge facing our society. This issue has far-reaching implications for old people to use smartphones and computers, and its complexity requires a thorough examination. This essay will delve into the root causes of this problem and propose viable solutions to address it effectively.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Many people believe winning is the only way to have fun and enjoy while playing games. Even though winning a game is a big part of playing and every one desire to win, winning is not the important part of it, there are greater values to playing a game.

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Nowadays,children watch a lot of TV and play video games.However ,some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child's mental health.

Nowadays it is argued that a huge part of children spend more time on television and play online game. Nevertheless, parents think that these activities have show bad influence on a child's brain health. This essay completely agrees with the given statements. In this essay, i will suggest some relevant examples in the upcoming paragraphs. Firstly in video games,can become immune to violence and more inclined to act violently themselves. Secondly spending too much time playing video games can isolate children.

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Nowadays,children watch a lot of tv and play video games.However,some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child's mental health .

Nowadays it is argued that huge part of children spent more time on television and play online games. Nevertheless parents think that these activities are show bad influence for a child's brain health. This essay completely agrees with the given statwments. In this essay i will suggest sone relevant examples in upcoming paragraphs. Firstly in video games,can become immune to the violence and more inclined to act violently themselvess. Secondly spending too much time playing video games can isolate children.

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Some people believe that criminals should be put into prison as long as possible. However, others believe that it is necessary to educate those people in local community. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is ongoing debate about whether criminals should be put into the jail while some argue that it is better to provide education to them. This essay will delve into both the views along with my own perspective in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Crime rates are likely to decline due to the advancements in technology, which will help prevent and solve crimes in an easier way. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays modern and advanced technology help in preventing and finding criminals in a quick manner , as a result ,the crime rate is likely to decrease in the future. In my opinion , I agree with this statment and this essay will explain my reassons .

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Some people believe that advertisements have a useful function for TV viewers while others disagree. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals believe that advertisements show a productive function for television viewers while others would argue that it has a negative impact on the people watching television ads. I disagree with this statement about ads having useful consequences because advertisements give insufficient information that can have serious effects on human life in terms of health and safety.

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People spend more and more time browsing social networks. Is it a positive or negative development? Should anything be done to restrict children’s access to social networks? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays People's big problem is social networks and it became massive part of their life. there are some benefits and harms on the social network. it depends how to use it. especially,people spend a lot of time on the social media (facebook, Instagram,etc). it is a negative point. However, Some of them who use to develop themselves, growing their life quality.

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Scientists tell us some activities are good for health, and others are bad. Despite knowing that millions of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes, and what are the solutions?

All over the world, intelligensia shares healthy lifestyle habits for adoption as well as unhealthy habits for complete abhortion. Despite this, many in society continue engaging in unhealthy activities for many reasons which this essay will delineate, along with proposed solutions.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are some people who believe that it is beneficial to save money for their children, so that it could be used in the future, whereas others argue that opinion. I believe that it is a good idea to keep some of their monthly wages for use in the future.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is commonly seen that there is greater chance of committing crimes again by criminals who have served their first sentence. this is mainly due to the less job opportunities. However, this problem can be tackled with the help of effective measures.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be pasengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people believe that in the future all cars will be driverless which means people travelling inside these vehicles will be pasengers while some individuals believe that it will be problems, If cars is coming driverless. Both sides have opposit opinion that means create a huge arguement about this subject. In this essay, I will discuss them before presening my own opinion.

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(S)İn the future , nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate about whether published newspapers and books are needed in the future.Because due to advancements in the technology, almost all people can search for books , which they want, in online website without any phsical effort and they save their money and time.Although this essay mostly agree with this perspective, it will examine both sides including drawacks such as challenging for older people.

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