IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 572

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

5.5

band

Some people believe that happiness is a person responsibility while other thinks it’s depend on other factors.Do you agree or disagree.

It is believed that everyone deserves happiness in every place we belong. Everybody should be happy about the factors they think can make them happy. I strongly agree that a healthy mind causes happiness for every person in this world.

5.5

band

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

SUCCESS DOES NOT ALWAYS MEAN EARNING MONEY. I DISAGREE WITH THE STATEMENT THAT ONLY PEOPLE WITH MONEY ARE SUCCESSFUL.

5.5

band

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

MONEY IS OFTEN CONSIDERED AS THE ULTIMATE MARKER OF SUCCESS. I DO NOT AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT BECAUSE I THINK EVEN THOUGH MONEY IS ONE OF THE DETERMINANTS OF SUCCESS, IT IS NOT WHAT DETERMINES WHETHER A PERSON IS SUCCESSFUL OR NOT.

5.5

band

Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports and games. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.

In the modern era, many youngsters are spending more and more time to play computers, as well as, a mobile phones. In the present day, we have to motivate the children to play outdoor games instead of mobile or computer games. I strongly agree with this statement and I will discuss it in the upcoming paragraph with my opinion.

5.5

band

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and age together. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is often thought that music has a unique and better ways of uniting people irrespective of place, culture and age. I totally agree to this opinion and I think that through music English language can spread across the globe and also strengths national unity.

5.5

band

Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is commonly believed that students are being worked during studies it leads to the lack of time for study and they are being felt under stress. I believe that balancing of work and education is difficult to maintain well. However, I shall discuss regarding the causes for this along with a rational conclusion.

5.5

band

. Today more countries import food from different parts of the world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

5.5

band

Today more countries import food from different parts of the world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

There is no iota of doubt that nowadays more firms purchase eatable things from different parts of the globe. It has made people’s lives a bed of roses, ,however sometimes it opens a pandora’s box. The following paragraphs would highlight the merits and demerits of the same.

5.5

band

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the world.

Myriad of places in the globe depends on the tourism as a main source of revenue. It is commonly believed that it can also be a origin of problems if it is not maintained well. In my point of view, advantages of touristry outweigh its disadvantages. However, I shall discuss both notions along with a rational conclusion.

5.5

band

Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

Over the past 2 decades, there has been an increase in the usage of social media

5.5

band

Some teahers say students should be organized into groups to study. Others argue that student should be made to study alone. Tell the benefits of each study method. Which one do you think is more effective?

In the modern era of times, group study plays a key role in academic success. It is argued that studying in a group is more effective compared to self-study. This essay will discuss the advantages of both methods and will provide an overall opinion.

5.5

band

41. Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separates rooms for work. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, official authority have planned to decorate their workplace with a new design. They are now intended to implement an open space office room, whereas it was close door before. However, considering both the concepts, I agree that the facilities outway its drawback. I will provide argument in favour of my statement in the forthcoming paragraphs.

5.5

band

What are the advantages and disadvantages of using CCTV cameras to fight crime?

Nowadays, people are using CCTV cameras in important places to reduce crime. For many people, the installation of CCTVs is the most useful way to tackle intruders. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why the adoption of close circuit television cameras has been increasingly popular to deal with criminals and some of the challenges to overcome.

5.5

band

Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Over the past decades, childhood and adolescent specialists have looked for various ways to enhance children's performance at school. For instance, some experts mention that positive reinforcement is the best method to improve student performance while others mention that punishment is the only way to prevent from doing bad things again. In this essay, I will discuss whether beating or rewarding students can improve grades and overall achievement.

5.5

band

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the modern century, people would like to eat such as fast food and cold drink, but it will harmful to our life. several manufacturing industries are producing many products with high sugar content, which is unhealthy for humankind. However, the government should increase the price of sugar. I strongly agree with this statement and I will discuss it in the upcoming paragraph.

5.5

band

Over sugar consumption is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility of sugar intake. Discuss both the views and give your opinion?

It is commonly believed that excessive use of sugar is really harmful to our health and there are many arguments about who is responsible for preventing over sugar consumption. Many assume that governments ought to impose some regulations whereas others think that it's individual's duty to solve this problem. This essay will discuss both the views.

5.5

band

Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, technology plays an important role to share an information with other. It is obvious that there is more chance that famous actors and celebrities can express their opinions on public occasions they have nothing to do with. In my opinion, I believe it is a negative impact to society and supporting reasons will be discussed in this passage.

5.5

band

People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is being expounded that aged buildings should be demolished and replaced by new buildings. I also agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion and views regarding the importance of the old buildings.

5.5

band

Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reason for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people are of view that it is uncanny to have a pre determined supperanutaion age for eveyone and few employees deserve a golden handshake and recieve pension at an earlier age. I strongly agree with this notion as certain jobs required physical wellbeing and also long term disassociation with family. In the upcoming essay strongs points related to my opnion will be discussed along with nature of workers who can get rewards from this.

5.5

band

Some people think traditional games are better than modern games in helping children develop their abilities. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued, that some the individuals reckon that conventional games are more effective rather than today's games in order to cultivating a child's development. I firmly agree with the proposed statement, that classical games are more action-based that help to develop their knowledge and are more enjoyed in life than the modern ones.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.