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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss and give your option

For the majority of crimes, lockup is the best solution. A certain number of individuals claim that confinement is necessary, whereas others do not. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons why bridewell is necessary and some drawbacks of it.

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Are there more advantages to living in a city than in the country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Whether cities are better than rural areas or vice-versa is a contentious question, it depends on one's choice, as to, what they prefer. Both cities and rural areas have their pros and cons. Rural areas have quaint environments whereas there is always something fascinating about big cities. In my opinion, the answer to the question “Are there more advantages to living in a city than in the country?” is not like one shoe fit for all, it’s a totally subjective choice.

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Prison is the best punishment for criminals.Discuss

There are argumentative issues among people about punishing the people violated.Some of them strongly believe that prisoning them is the only straightway,while others say it isn't.This essay will discuss both views and explain my own opinion on this controversy.

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Some people prefer to stay in the same job for same company, but other prefer to change job frequently.You should use specific reason to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides.

In the modern world of work, the attitude that "work is for life" is no longer exists. Today, while, many people take advantage of opportunities to change jobs, others do not want to change jobs. In my essay, I will look at the pros and cons of the above attitudes.

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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Dicuss both views.

People assume that offspring should start learning education such as numeracy, literacy and others at the activity of five or six. But some of them consider that scion should be taught from the youth of 7. And now we shall discuss both of views.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that every country has different cultures depending on each country and citizens devote it. Consequently, it is always debatable whether visitors should follow local customs and behaviour or the country should habituate to cultural differences. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour latter.

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

It would not be wrong to say that daily exercise for children in schools is important. However, many believe that it is the responsibility of parents to make sure their offspring are getting adequate playtime, and should not be a part of the curriculum, as it wastes a lot of valuable time. This essay disagrees with this statement as guardians usually have longer working hours and it can get difficult for them to manage work-life balance. Also, for the proper functioning of the brain and overall fitness, it becomes important to include it in the school timetable.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Recently, companies are more likely to emphasise the new modification of their products in their advertising. In my opinion, there are two main reasons for this and I believe it is a beneficial development.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

There is no doubt that a huge number of people spend a long time working and giving a small amount of time to do funny activities. I strongly believe that the balance between work and relaxation is required to live a healthier life. In this essay, I am going to discuss both benefits and drawbacks with my point of view.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs. for example, working for a charity,improving the neighborhood and teaching sports to younger children. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It would not be wrong to say that community services are a great way to explore ourselves. It is believed by many people that these charity works should be a part of the curriculum in high schools.

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Question: Do you agree or disagree that in the near future the role of teachers will be taken by technology?

Due to the development of technology, some people claim that in the near future the occupation of teachers will be taken by technology, in my own opinion, I strongly agree with this statement, and I would like to describe my opinions in the following essay.

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In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

There are different opinions about the pros and cons of having buses and trucks run automatically without the existence of drivers. In my opinion, the merits of this future of means of transportation outweigh the downsides it may bring about.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people

Owning a home is everybody’s dream regardless of to which class he or she belongs to, whether he or she belongs to a middle class, lower middle class. So, owning a home has always been important for people all the time. In my opinion, this is a positive situation, because it eases the financial burden on the people once they have their own home.

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there are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweight the benefits of mobile phone?

Nowadays, mobile phone has become an indispensable part of human lives. However, there are problems associated with the use of it in social, medical and technical fields. In spite of these issues, I would argue that the benefits of cellular phone outweight the drawbacks which will be discussed in detali in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some psychologists recommend that to overcome stress in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time. Do you agree or disagree?

In todays fast pacing world, everybody is constantly moving trying to accomplish one task to another or even trying to do multi task. This constant working pattern leads to stress and anxiety for people. Some psychologists now seuugest to devote some time in a day when you do nothing. While some people disagree with this because they think this way they can never finish their work. But I strongly agree with this notion. The following paragraphs, I shall put forth some reasons for this phenomena.

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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness time classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree.

It is clear that automation is becoming increasingly common to use in the modern world. One idea believes that classroom cadre is substituting with machinery. I strongly agree with that nation.

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Some people say that governments need to prioritize the treatment and management od diseases of the people in the community. Otherss say that it should pay attention to primary health care more. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

There are some individuals who are of the view that the government should allocate a greater amount of funding and put more importance on treating and managing the conditions of people who are sick in the community. However, others argue that it is a more practical option for countries to shift their focus into improving the primary healthcare system of the nation to benefit more people.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.

Most of the population is dependent on tourism in one way or the other as it is their primary source of income. This essay will demonstrate how tourism is essential in the life of local people as well as to promote the nation’s economy and it will also show how tourism can lead to some problems like displacement of local people. Whilst acknowledging the drawbacks, the essay will argue that the disadvantages of the tourist industry outweigh the advantages.

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3. There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

In the modern society of today, music is one of the most essential things in our life; therefore, there are plenty of reasons why people need music in living. Domestic music plays a vital role in a cultural country, and I believe that it is more important than worldwide music that people listen to everywhere every day.

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Nowadays people have adopted an unhealthy lifestyle. Why do you think this is. How could this problem be solved?

Today, it is very common for us to see people living unhealthy lifestyles. This essay will discuss the factors contributing to this trend, followed by measures to address this problem.

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