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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Some people argue that the most significant issue of the environment is losing species while others think that there are more global difficulties. In my opinion, I think there are some disasters that should be dealt with.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

A large number of criminals who serve their first prison sentence, leave prison only to re-offend. This is mainly because of the lack of rehabilitation and difficulty finding regular employment once released. Some solutions should be implemented to deal with criminals who re-offend.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In several, cities a rising number of the population are coming down with health problems as a consequence of eating a lot of quick food. It is hence a need for governments to load a superior tax on this type of meal.

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing(for example,through cellphone tracking and security cameras).In many cases,the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Technologies are now considered for observing what people are talking about and performing in society via using security cameras and telephone following.In addition,people who are being observed do not know this is occurring.In my opinion,having these kinds of technology are produced more benefits than drawbacks.The following cases and examples below will help support my point of view.

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As public safety is of the highest importance. it is often necessary to test new products on animals. It is befter for a few animals to suffer than for human life to be placed at risk by untested products. To what extent do you agree with above?

Nowadays, the beauty industry is flourishing and it has become a billion-dollar industry. Animals are often used for the experiment purposes of the newly launched products for the sake of not harming human life. I strongly advocate this approach and the benefits will be covered in this essay.

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Some people argue that spending a lot of money holding birthday parties, wedding parties and other celebration is a waste of money. However, others believe such parties are important for individuals and for society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In most cultures celebrating important events in life with others is common. It is debatable whether the money spent on these parties is wise spending or not. In my view, it is important for one ‘s personal and social life to mark and share special occasions but I would advise limiting expenses and investing instead of spending. This essay will discuss this in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some parts of the world , you have to have your own residence rather than a renting house due to different reasons. Different conditions by the landlord and frequently rising rent money are the main drawbacks of renting a house but , the main positive thing about you living in your own house is freedom . Hence this writer believes that owning a house is a far more positive situation than renting a house.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace.Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a univeristy?

Some individuals argue that college must teach and prepare students for their future work while others claim that the real function of a university is to provide the knowledge to their students ignoring if it will be useful in their future job or not. This essay agrees with the latter rather than the former and it aims to explain the reason for this opinion.

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It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Learning history is an important part of the school curriculum. It is debated that learning the history of one's own region is more important than the knowledge of world history. This essay does not agree with the suggestion that local history is more important. This essay will initially discuss how learning international history extends a student's knowledge beyond his country and increases his opinion about world politics.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Opinions are divided on whether museums charge for admission or not. In my opinion, the drawbacks of charging people for admission take precedence over the benefits. I will discuss both the advantages and the disadvantages in detail in this essay before presenting a reasoned conclusion.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose higher taxes on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often argued that heavy taxes should be applied to Junk food by the higher authorities because it leads to a surge in the number of health ailments in many parts of the world. I strongly disagree with this statement because affluent families will consume it more and the working-class will suffer financially.

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Research shows that business meetings, discussions and trainings are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology advancement, especially the internet, has resulted in having more numbers of meetings, discussions and training through the internet. Although this trend would bring a few drawbacks, in my opinion, it is likely to be more beneficial.

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-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some argue that recent developments in technology allowed students to reach and emphasize new information faster than ever. I completely agree with this statement and in this essay I will describe the reasons behind my opinion.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many students require a computer for education. Some people say that it is a good trend, while others say it is leading to bad consequences. This essay will outline both points and argue in favour of the latter opinion.

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“Do you think extra-curricular activities are important in a student’s life?” Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In the contemporary education system, all emphasis is on classroom knowledge and the entire childhood is spent between numerous books and project submissions. The current curriculum is not emphasizing extra-curricular activities. I am in agreement that the non-classroom activities will shape up the child's future and in the following paragraphs, I will elaborate further on the matter.

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is undeniable that scientific and technological advancements have helped people’s lives to become much more convenient in the past few decades. However, I do not agree with the idea that it is the best time to be alive as I believe people in the present are also facing their own issues.

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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a statement regarding the fact that , by using the internet , we are able to access a wide variety of information . I am in favour of this opinion and in this essay , I am going to mention some examples and draw a conclusion.

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In most successful organizations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers is important, other people said that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

Some individuals believe that the relationship between directors and employees is the most crucial factor, while others do not agree. I will discuss both views and explain how I am side of first group opinions.

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Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, choosing where one can live to have a better future has raised many arguments. Some people believe that cities provide much more positive points for their residents while others opine that rural areas would be appropriate places. I, personally, agree with the former one and in forthcoming ,paragraphs I shall clean my thoughts.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree ? use reason and specific examples to explain your answer.

It is best that providing children to participate in a workshop or having fun with activities can be more effective to improve skills and increase imagination than reading.In my opinion,I strongly agree that allowing kids to enjoy different activities is the most practical choice.The following cases and examples below will help support my point of view.

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