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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Many people believe that film is less important art than other forms such as literature and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In these days and ages, it is argued that movies have less contribution to the arts than other creative expressions like literature and painting. From my perspective, the value of artistic activities depends on the benefits gained by individuals engaging with them.

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Some people think that it is best to save money, for example in a bank or savings scheme. Other people feel that money should be spent whenever it is available. Discuss these views and reach an opinion on this debate.

The richest persons of the world generate capital by investing and saving their valuable assets. Many entities save stock in a financial institution or in other savings schemes, because it benefits a lot of human beings by protecting their valuable assets from any sort of theft or extravagant use, while others believe, available abundance should be spent without any savings.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

With the advance of technology, the usage of mobile phones as a method of payment is increasing around the world. Apps are being developed to make life easier and more convenient. The advantages of mobile payment outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will discuss the convenience of that method, as well as the reasons why some people may not trust on apps for their payments.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

There is an increasing trend in the number of society being held in jail as many criminals re-offend. There are many who believe that confinement is less effective than in the past and the amount of people who can embark on something is low. In my opinion, there are several reasons why criminals relapse into crime after being released back into the population.

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With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast foods for the main meals? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, communities have a variety of options to choose from their foodstuff menu. Although, some communities are of the view that due to the fast pace of modern life more and more population are preferring fast food for their main grub, others are of a different view. In this essay, we will be discussing the disadvantages of eating junk food. There are two primary reasons for this.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Currently, the role of women in the military has never failed to provoke debates among people. While some claim that women should serve the same position as men in the national police force and military, the opposite makes a statement that they are not appropriate to these aspects. This essay is devoted to examining both sides of this argument and presenting my personal view of these.

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Most modern families have both parents working, and as a result, children spend less and less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause?

almost in every family in this modern era, all the two couples have businesses to run. this is a major concern as offsprings spend lesser periods with their mums and dads. could there be a cause for this behaviour? what are the effects this issue could bring forth? in this essay, the ideas behind this attitude will be explored and the negative impacts on both the minors and the society at large will be highlighted.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The world is changing rapidly and there are numerous challenges which countries around the world will be facing in near future. Problems like global warming, population, pollution, scarcity of resources are a few of them. In the coming years, in my country, India, the biggest obstacle which will impact the nation will be overpopulation and poverty. In this essay, I will discuss about both the problems and possible solutions to solve them.

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Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you a little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

Even though a work-life balance is something that most people aim for in their career, the truth is in reality it is not that reachable. Whereas some individuals rather choosing a high-paying job with long hours, others prefer to be working in a lower-paying one, as they get more freedom to spend their time with family and friends. I tend to agree with this latter statement since everything in living is so unpredictable that nobody should spend the bigger part of it working.

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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as sahara desert and The Antartica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

Nowadays, travel to uninhabited spots is increasing by leap.In addition, youngsters are choosing the places like Antarctica and desserts over Rajasthan to trip for exploring.This essay will be given a detailed explanation in the following paragraphs on the merits and demerits of the journey to scolded areas.

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Scientific research should be the responsibility of government than commercial organizations . Do you agree or disagree .

The growth of a country and its development depends greatly on its ability to conduct scientific research. It is popularly argued that the responsibility of conducting these kinds of researches should be on the government rather than on the privately-owned institutions or organizations. I agree that law-controlled or moderated research is more advantageous to citizens and this essay presents the reasons why it is more advantageous compared to a corporate-owned R & D.

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Road accidents are more frequent these days and claim many lives each year. As a result, some people suggest that drivers should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single driving test, to improve the situation. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of repeat driving tests? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Over a few decades, there is an increase in the number of car accidents each year causing numerous people have died. Therefore, some suggest that lifelong automobile licenses should be abolished and, instead, constant driving tests should be introduced. In my opinion, the latter method will bring about demerits more than benefits and I will discuss both sides of this mean in the essay below,

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. DO the advanatges of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is widely believed that learning a foreign language at primary school is more beneficial compared to secondary school. This trend has both merits and demerits. In my opinion, I believe that despite having a few drawbacks, it is vital in numerous ways for students.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, due to technological development, computers occupy the basis of the world. Although I accept that lectures based on computers possibly bring some risk to students, I believe the benefits of the instalment of computers outweigh the drawbacks, for which will be explained in this essay.

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Some people think one should stay all their life in the same job whereas others Advocate changing jobs from time to time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The debate between job holders and job hoppers is undeniable. Some believe that a keep doing the same job for years is necessary, while others believe that shifting jobs after a certain time is beneficial. this essay will articulate both views along with My perception.

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Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some advantages or disadvantages of television for children

Nowadays, there is no doubt that children want to watch television more than ever before. However, the act of children watching television also has advantages and disadvantages that people should consider properly. I will explain both of them in the next paragraphs.

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The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?

Ever since the technological epoch took place, it is considered that the progression of any nation majorly relies on how many science-based resources a country has. Hence, a proposal of investing more capital on mainstream subjects than art subjects is put forwarded which in my perspective appears superficially attractive, though, in such pursuit, other subjects ought not to be overlooked.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Worldwide globalization has its advantages and disadvantages , Due to the rapid industrial revolution in the automobile sector, more advanced and affordable machines are available to the public. This phenomenon is one of the many reasons for an exponential increase in car purchases over the years, which eventually led to major traffic congestion in many cities across the world. This essay will further elaborate my views and thus lead to possible solutions.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There has been a dispute over cutting down public recreation areas for apartment buildings in the city centre, helping people save commuting time for work. Though there are some benefits to commuters, I would not support replacing parks and gardens with the purpose of their time convenience.

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Some people think that music lessons aren’t important and that children should pay more attention to science. Do you agree or disagree?

Although some individuals consider music lessons as an irrelevant school subject implying that children should focus more on science I personally disagree with this idea since it helps combat stress and advance adolescents’ erudition.

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