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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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n major cities around the world, traffic congestion has become a serious problem. How can this problem be tackled? Give reasons and examples from your own experience

The high volume of vehicles on the road is a severe issue for large cities around the globe. To solve this serious problem government should focus on improving their public travel systems and give incentives to promote the use of bikes.

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The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices are harmful to individual and to the society they live in. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Since the advent of gadgets such as smartphones and tablets, which are mostly used for entertainment, people have been arguing about the effect on individuals and society itself. I believe that handheld devices are detrimental for people as they might cause health deterioration and affect the efficiency of employees due to addiction to smartphones.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A few people believe that adolescents must be encouraged to participate in unpaid social service during their free time as it would be beneficial for both youth and society. I disagree with this view as the benefits outweigh disadvantages.

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Q. Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Television has been the major source of time-pass activities for many people for decades. In addition, television has been accused of making viewers lazy and less productive and ultimately affecting social life. This essay will discuss in detail whether this accusation is valid or not and give my personal opinion.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree?

It is often argued that most of the artists receive low income from their work field, because of that they are doing job in a different field ,,however government should provide fund in order to perceive job in their field. I strongly agree with this statement, in this ,essay we will discuss why it is necessary for the government should help financially with the artist work.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Due to the rapid technological development, it is predicted that people will no longer read and get news from paper-based sources. Although there is no doubt that e-books and reading news via the Internet is getting more and more popular, I strongly disagree with the idea that it will be the only way of getting information, nor that it will be free of charge.

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It is argued that we are living in a throw-away society: people throw away what they use in daily life, instead of recycling or reusing them. Why has this happened and how to address this issue?

People are likely to use products only once instead of keeping these items for a long time. It is important to understand why this throw-away culture has developed and how we reverse this trend.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's world advertisements have become unattached things from individuals' life. Although some people argue that advertisements are so common thing in our daily routine, others and I believe that due to the development of advertisement's industry, it is a productive way to lead people to buy.

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Rich countries are getting richer and poor countries are getting poorer. What are the causes? What could be done to solve this problem?

Poor countries are getting poorer whereas rich countries are getting richer. There are many reasons behind this statement and this essay will discuss the two main reasons (Population and Poor Governance) as well as solutions to these problems.

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Many people wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case. It is a good thing or a bad thing.

It has been observed that nowadays, people prefer wearing trendy clothing. Many reasons could surface for this practice. If asked, I believe this is not appropriate. The reasons for my inclination will be elaborated in the following write-up.

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More and more people are moving away from agriculture background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this. What solutions can you offer.

Nowadays, many people of countryside area whose the primary source of income are agriculture, are shifting to the metropolis in order to seek jobs. The overpopulation of big cities is the principal effect of this phenomenon. This essay would try to make an attempt to shed some light on the repercussions of this trend along with the feasible remedies.

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These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Undoubtedly, in today's fast-paced era, the trend of immigration has been skyrocketed. The majority of young adults leave their home province while being matured. This phenomenon has its own boons as well as pitfalls. Notwithstanding, this disquisition delves into both outlooks, and subsequently explores why drawbacks supersede the benefits.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Crime is an illegal action that is increasing at a higher rate and causing serious problems across the globe. However, some people believe that giving longer prison sentences can reduce crime, while, a section of society believes that there are some better ways to solve this. In this essay, both viewpoints will be taken into consideration and my opinion will be given in the conclusion.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they trended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your opinion?

In the last few decades, students travel to other countries for higher studies which were extremely tough in the past. This phenomenon has its own pros and cons and I will shed light on them in the next few paragraphs. But I contend that the positives of this change are far more than the negatives.

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Some people think that in order to save traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather in suburbs or in the countryside . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by certain individuals that masses should move to cities from rural or distant areas in order to mitigate traffic and transportation issues. In my opinion, I completely agree with this perspective as that's how people would be able to save their time and can enjoy having better transit facilities without congestions.

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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of traveling to a work place every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

Although there is no doubt that working remotely is an enormous weal, it is important to consider how employers will track the productivity of their labourers. While there are abundant people who think that going to the office is crucial, some believe that it is a waste of age. In this disquisition, I will delve into both arguments, and I will explain my supporter for the latter view.

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In some places, young people find it difficult to communicate with older people. Why is this? What are the solutions?

The debate regarding the way young people communicate with the old generation has been going since few years. Younger society nowadays is finding it difficult to liaize with elders. This essay will elucidate the main reasons behind this behavioural pattern along with solutions to tackle this situation.

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In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Different function areas, such as educational institutes and housing areas, are designed in separate locations in some cities. I think that this way of planning results in more benefits than problems.

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Nowadays many people with families leave their country to work abroad. Do you think the benefits of this trend outweigh the disadvantages for the families? Give your opinion and include any relevant example.

In recent times, several individuals prefer to settle down in foreign county with their families. I believe that there are numerous advantages while migrating apart from its demerits which are discussed in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It cannot be denied that obesity has become a severe problem that endangers the lives of people throughout the world, especially in developed countries. I have the belief that it stems from modern life, but it can be eliminated via straightforward measures.

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