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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A country’s economic prosperity lies in the citizens’ hard work. While expanding citizens’ working hours, however, may bring a country more productivity to some degree, I do not agree that forcing people to keep a long working time could completely determine its economic power.

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Nowadays, some workplaces tend to employ equal numbers of men and women workers. Do you think it is positive or negative development?

Today, there is an equal number of men and women employed by some of the multinational companies across the globe. In my opinion, I think it is advantageous progress particularly to provide employment opportunities to females and treating them as equal as males, while this still has few negligible disadvantages.

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Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve poverty. So rich countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Underdeveloped countries receive a substantial amount of financial aid from the developed regions. An interesting point observed here is that providing monetary help will not eliminate the root cause. People believe that the focus should now be shifted towards helping other forms of assistance. I too strongly believe that this change in thinking will surely help in eradicating the actual issue.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believed that advertising has become so ineffective, it nowadays does not interest society anymore. Meanwhile, others argue that the commercial is still taking effect. This essay argues that the broadcast is still encouraging the crowd to do shopping.

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Many parents give jobs to their children to do around the house in order to develop their characters and self-sufficiency. Discuss this idea and give your opinion

Raising a child properly needs having thought about how to teach, or show them different aspects of life, that would help them to become more successful individuals. It is believed that by giving the kids responsibility in their own house, such as handling the normal daily house chores, they will gain self-confidence and it would be great for their personality as well. I totally support this idea of upbringing kids with multi-tasks, including routine works related to their home. I will mention them in this essay.

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Some people think the advantages of international tourism outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree?

Global tourism is one of the important aspects that has led to positive relationships between nations. A few people believe that the benefits of international tourism are far higher than its drawbacks. I completely agree to support the positive impacts of this phenomenon are far higher than the negatives. In this essay, I will discuss both these aspects in detail and provide examples to back up my opinion.

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Many parents complain about violence promoted to their children through video games, TV programs and other media. Why is it happening? What can be the solution for it?

Nowadays, parents complain about how violence gets promoted in video games, television and other media. This trend is certainly true and is caused, primarily, due to the market, if violence is bought, then it will be produced. One possible solution to this issue could be in the same parents who need to be more aware of what their children are consuming. In the following essay, it will be discussed and analysed both the causes and the solutions for this issue.

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Some people say that e books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the last few decades, a robust increment of the online study material is why few individuals contend that online literature will be the only option for readers in the near future. I believe that the pace of change depicts that it is quite possible and there are multiple reasons for this development.

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Some people say the main way o be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

At the outset of globalization, the attitudes of citizens regarding a variety of social aspects have been drastically changed. As a result, some people state that the key element of happiness is none other than money. Although money influences the happiness of an individual within a certain limit, it is not the only factor that decides happiness in life. There are a plethora of other elements which contribute to happiness in life. In the forthcoming paragraphs, the impact of money on happiness and other pivotal factors that contribute to happiness will be elaborated.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

It is often argued that adverts are immensely victorious at making people purchase the items. However, some believe that these marketing tricks are so usual that people tend to ignore them easily. This essay will discuss how ads have become creative these days; on the other hand, some commercials are too dull to watch, and people should only buy products based on their requirements.

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Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Being an organiser of international sports events like the Olympics is considered as a matter of prestige for a country whereas some people opined that it is not good. Both of the viewpoints will be discussed in this essay along with my opinion and conclusion.

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Some school leavers tend to go for travelling or work for a period of time before directly going to university. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages?

It is often argued that after completing school education young crowd tend to go for travel or job for a particular period of time before taking straight admission to the university. In my ,opinion there are numerous advantages of working or travelling before going to university. In this ,essay we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of travelling or work for a certain period of time for institute leavers.

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Many people now have the freedom to work and live anywhere because of advances in communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge

Nowadays, the advancements in technology and transportation have not only changed individual's style of doing a job but also their living atmosphere.There are certain benefits with technological updates in the mentioned fields and these new inventions are also associated with negatives.The following paragraphs would elaborate on both of these matters.

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Some people believe that music should be taught in school, while others think that it is best to focus on science and computer. Do you agree or Disagree?

School has been a place where youngsters are taught and cultivated a bunch of knowledge whether it's scientific or morality one. Therefore, one of the learning centre's objectives is to prepare our next generation to be educated and ready to face the world. In this essay, I will provide my opinion that I extremely agree about having every subject in all schools' curriculum with the reasons below.

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Some people think that it is beneficial to travel abroad, but others think it is unnecessary because we have the internet and TV. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that the question of whether we should travel abroad for a better experience or stay at home for immediate excursions remains a source of controversy in tourism orientation. While a number of people believe that personal involvement is in higher consideration, I would argue that staying at home and making a virtual tour would be an alternative way to see the world.

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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Because there were no major wars in the last 70 years or so, people have started debating whether governments should invest a lot of funds in defence or not. Some people argue that globalization and technological advances have made the world a safer place, while others opine that we are more vulnerable than ever before. I am of the latter view and thus disagree with the given statement. Reasons for this will be presented in the following paragraphs.

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High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick? Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

These days Population is increasing day by day and high demand of jobs and easily available labours so workers go the extra mile and neglect their health problems. People have to do extra effort to remain in this human race so despite they are ill, they go to the office and complete their tasks . however, some people believe that they will infect other staff and also create a serious issue for themselves . I completely agree and in this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In the coming times, everyone will prefer to read everything they require on online platforms instead of buying the print version of publications or papers.

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Some people say that the best way to reduce crime is by using prison sentence To what extend do you agree or disagree?

People work on many ways to reduce crime. Part of the population thinks the best method for the issue is sending criminals into prison. This essay will discuss why prison sentence is not the best idea to control crimes.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as that. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is an unquestionable fact that friendship is one of the great relationships as compared to other relations. A school of thought is of the opinion that it is better to make friends with the same nature, whereas others refute it, and believe that it is a good idea to have friends who have opposite viewpoints. Both viewpoints would be discussed further before my inclination.

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