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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons ehy somrone should learn a foreign language . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this modern era, non-native accents becoming more popular around the world.Some individuals claim that few people will learn different languages because it helps them to get a job or for a tour in a different nation, while it is true that most people that study a language in school may never get the chance to use it, there are perks to studying language beyond an increased capacity to communicate.In my opine,knowing certain dialects can help humans in future aspects as it provides flexible communication and choice.

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Museums and art galleries should show local history and culture instead of work from different countries. Discuss both views and give opinion

Most people like to visit the museum.Nowadays, time most nations prefer to keep the art of their own country.It is considered that in museums every country should put only their own information.However, the leading nations try to explore art and craft from all around the world I largely agree with this statement,my inclination is elaborated further.

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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

Accomplishment, to some people, is based on money and material things. In addition, a number of individuals believe that success and personal achievements are linked to wealth. I believe that each person has their own definition of accomplishment, and on this basis, affluence cannot be taken as a reference of measurement for personal achievements or goals.

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In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and into regional areas. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

Nowadays, more and more companies and businesses are being built in every corner of the cities, which causes several problems for their citizens. To solve this problem, in some nations, governments are encouraging industrial sites to move out of the city and into regional areas. Some people state that there would be more disadvantages if governments implement this measure, others believe that it would bring a number of benefits than drawbacks to countries. I mainly agree with the latter view for the following reasons.

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Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Based on the domination of television,some individuals have alleged it can be utilized as a pedagogical amenity,whereas opponents believe it just can be exploited for entertainment.Although in my point of view,its penetration for amusement is stronger than for educational purposes.However,both sides are uttered here.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning foreign languages is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country.Others say that tese are not the only reasons why someone should learn foreign language. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that learning a foreign language would use just for working or travelling in an abroad country, as appose to others who think there are other reasons. Although travel or finding a job are good arguments, in my opinion, we can learn a foreign speech for education or business too.

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More and more people are working from home rather than at the workplaces. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a highly debated issue which place is suitable for employees to pursue their work. Few multitudes opine that the workforce can get advantages if they choose a home for doing their task owing to the family support but others ponder that it may have a detrimental impact on the progress of work. This essay will intend to analyse both views along with my perspective.

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Some people think that the best way to solve global environment problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world has been experiencing environmental issues including climate change. To solve these problems, some people argue that the prices of fuel should be higher while others suggest increasing the cost of fuel is not a solution. In this essay, I will discuss why raising the cost of fuel is not the most useful way.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The fact is that some people prefer studying humanitarian subjects like History, on the contrary others are would like to learn Science and Technology. Each of these thoughts is clear because everyone has their preferences in studying.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, others think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both ways and give your opinion.

Nowadays most communities are interested to study at universities to get a better job and some folk think that getting experience and developing soft skills important than education.In my ,opinion having a territory education puts one step ahead of others.In this essay, I will explain both views and give my opinion.

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In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The fact that the number of victims of gun shootings is rising day by day because of gun ownership is true. Even though some people claim the importance of guns in terms of recreation and self-defence, I totally disagree with this statement which will be enlightened in this essay.

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In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The fact that the number of victims of gun shootings is rising day by day because of gun ownership is true. Even though some people claim the importance of weapons in terms of recreation and self-defence, I totally disagree with this statement which will be enlightened in this essay.

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At present, the media affects people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society. Is it a positive or negative development?

Undoubtedly, the life of people is being dramatically affected by the media, nowadays. It gives them a chance to get fame in society, and I believe it is a positive development as it could be a good source of earning.

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Some people think that because of email, social media and telephones, communication among people is less personal now than it used to be. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Communication between people has never been faster or easier than it is now, thanks to the development of the internet. Some people, however, claim that despite these advancements, interaction is more superficial, and lacks genuine interaction. While I agree that this is true to some extent, I feel that advanced modern tools like email, social media and mobiles create wider networks and greater intimacy.

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes and suggest possible solutions?

In some businesses, employers often face serious concerns in new hires regarding lack of interpersonal skills, for example, cooperative skills. However, there are two potential causes for this and two possible solutions as well.

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Today there is increase in antisocial behaviour and lack of respect to others. what are the causes of this? What measures can be taken to reduce this problems?

These days, each society is engaged in misbehavioural and unrespectful attitudes. There is a large number of reasons that should be taken seriously; however, some causes such as unemployment as well as dysfunctional families will be discussed in this essay. Consequently, some possible solutions will be given.

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People say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

As a matter of fact that health-related problems are a vast concern in many societies and the investment of the government in sports facilities is believed to contribute significantly to the improvement. It is opposed by a part of the population because they believe that the strategy only slightly affects the health of whole residents and other measures should be taken. In my point of view, both opinions have pros and cons and the current authority should allocate a part of its budget for sports equipment.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary epoch, it is believed that instrumental plays are pivotal to bridging the gap between different nations. Personally, I believe that art has always played a critical role in mutual understanding between different traditions. Thus, this essay will be demonstrating the reasons behind that as well as my contention.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although some believe the most apparent aspect of environmental challenges is accessed mainly by specific natural creatures disappear, there are other factors from humans' actions: pollution by cars, and industrialized areas considered negatively unavoidable.

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Some people think that THE MAIN PURPOSE of SCHOOL is to turn children to good citizens and workers, rather than benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Based on the positive footprints that graduated folks can have on societies,some individuals believe that studying does not have any advantage for the person,who has pursued that.However,in my point of view,it similarly can have some affirmative impression on people's lives.Nevertheless,both sides are uttered here.

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