IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5. Page 552

IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money, so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it is argued that the computers are substitutes of libraries while others valued the books. In my opinion, books should be highly praised than technologies' gadget in terms of abundant sources and affordable resources.

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in countryside? What problems does this cause? What can be done to solve this problem?

Major cities of the most countries in the world are expanding at a very fast rate in terms of populations. One of the most common reasons found is the influx of young people from the smaller cities or towns to bigger cities for better job opportunities. This trend leaves rural areas with a sharp decline in percentage of youngsters to the total population. As a result, multiple problems in the social and economic sector are experienced by people.

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In order to study effectively, it requires comfort, peace and time. So it is impossible for a student to combine learning and employment at the same time because one distracts the other. Is it realistic to combine them at the same time? Support your opinion with examples.

Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement. A constructive dialogue on - distractions such as employment may affect a person's learning process - can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist on either side, in this essay I'm explaining why I agree with the above statement.

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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

Nowadays, exam tradition is rapidly growing up when the continual assessment method is demolished. However, children can be noticed, their mistakes of study and they can earn the confidence from giving exams which are beneficial, as well as there are some problems as well.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Evaluation method of students' performance has always been an area of contention around the globe. Some set of people considers that formal examinations are the best way to judge the performance of the student. Some folks believe that continual assessment such as course work and projects are the right way of evaluating the performance. In my opinion, I believe that both the ways are reliable in assessing student’s performance.

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Some people think that paying tax is their only duty, while others believe that we have more responsibility towards our society. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In this day and age, many people think that their primary duty is to pay tax only, while there are others who feel that we have more responsibilities to our community. In my opinion, I believe that paying tax is one of our many responsibilities and there are other ways in which we can serve the public.

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Many people have health problems just because they lead unhealthy lifestyle. what are the reasons and possible solutions?

Maintaining a good good physical condition is the prime responsibility of human beings. Over the last few decades, rapid change in ways of living inversely impacts the individual's well-being. Unhealthy lifestyle is considered the root cause of all health issues by the majority of people. This essay will discuss the reasons behind increasing fitness problems and possible ways to mitigate them.

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We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent does advertising influence our choices as consumers, and what effect does it have on our lifestyles? Discuss this issue and give your opinion.

Highlighting products an influential method to attract customers. A great deal of goods is displayed worldwide by several companies. I believe that it has vital impacts on our choices. Furthermore, it has both positive and negative influences on our daily lives.

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Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it would cause problems for younger. Do you agree or disagree? I

Recently, the debate on allowing people to work after the age of 60 has become heated. As far as I am concerned, I do not think that this would cause problems for younger.

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Some people believe that every human can create art. Other people think that art can only be created by people with special talents. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, creating an art has become ever increasing trait in different fields. However, while some argue that anybody is able to be creative regardless of their area, I am with those who hold the opinion that art can be produced only by those who possess some special skills.

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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

It is often observed that more institutions are providing the gadgets for the pupils to study at their academy by changing the old format of paperbacks or other items like evaluation and homework. The main merit of using the electronic device is that it helps them to get the information faster and the students will eventually forget the importance of writing is the drawback.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

In recent decades, many researchers have studied the importance of performing a fun activity with a kid. Indeed, to my mind, there is now convincing evidence that participating in an enjoyable activity with a child is able to enhance better skills and more creativity than reading. In this essay, I shall examine how research in permanent learning and looking from a child’s perspective on cases supports this view.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara or Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

Many visitors are showing their interest to visit troublesome places, like Sahara deserts or the Antartic in the present time. Although tourists can gain various exciting experiences from an adventurous trip, there are many drawbacks to be taken into account.

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Many people today are worried about young children using video games. What problems might these games cause, for children and society as a whole? How could these problems be reduced?

Spending time on video games has become increasingly popular among adolescents. This essay seeks to explore the underlying reasons and will outline potential ways to deal with it.

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With the advent of the internet, increasing numbers of people are shopping online. What issues arise from this and how can they be tackled?

It is observed that the advancement of technology has made more people to buy the products through electronically connected networks. The main problem this causes is less physical activity and the most viable solution is to educate the populace about the issue.

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A growing number of people feel that natural areas should not be exploited by people, and that they should be left as they are, while others argue that humans must use this land to satisfy their various needs, including farming and building. discuss both the views and give your opinion?

Many people believe that natural areas should be protected by individuals through avoiding exploitation, whereas others think that these lands should be utilized to fulfil all the needs of human beings, including for agriculture and housing. Although the growing number of people need more land space to plant crops that sufficient for them, I believe that this pristine areas should be conserved to prevent global warming.

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International events like the football World Cup other international sports occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is true that international games have contributed towards reducing tensions among nations and have presented an opportunity to demonstrate emotions of patriotism. I completely agree with this view and this essay will elucidate reasons which will support my view.

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Some people think that a sense of competition should be encouraged in children. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is a popular saying that the child is the father of the nation. The mould provided to them when they are young is what they are likely to become. While some people opine that cooperative children make better adults than competitive children, I cannot fully agree with this view. Competitiveness cannot be omitted entirely and I consider it necessary to some extent.

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Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Gender equality is very significant in all respects of a country. It is said that females should be provided the opportunities to be employed as police or other law enforcement services. I will subscribe to agree the view fully despite some minimal drawbacks and put forward evidences as to why girls have the incentives and qualities to be police or others.

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In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement. Discuss why it is so and the outcomes of this situation. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays, many people migrate to other countries to work, and in many cases, they take their family members with them as well. There are some positive and negative things about this trend, but in my personal opinion it has more advantages than the disadvantages and the following essay will discuss them both in details.

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