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Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout the world are starving. - Discuss the arguments for and against keeping pets. - To what extent do you agree?

These days, pets seem to attract more and more attention and much money from people....
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With all the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that space investigation has become an essential part of human life. However, there is no absolute agreement, whether the funding this kind of research is squandering and should be allocated to otherwise things or not. Personally, I tend to think that it is more acceptable to continue financing the examination of the cosmos....
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With all the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As the society develops, more conflicts and problems occur than in the past. There are someone arguing that humans should not allocate money on universe discovery as it is considered to be a waste, they suppose that money ought to be invested in other practical stuffs. From my point of view, I completely disagree with this statement for some fundamental reasons that will be analyzed in the following paragraphs....
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Too much money is spent on repairing old buildings, instead that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often alleged that the government isallocating a huge amount budget on renovating ancient buildings instead that sum should be spent on demolishing old constructions and building new ones. I am inclined to believe that this argument is not exactly true. However, funds should be used wisely....
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Too much money is spent on repairing old buildings, instead of repairing old buildings, that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that new constructions should be built by demolishing old ones instead of repairing them, given that a huge amount of money is being spent on repairs. This essay agrees with that statement because newly constructed offices can be used for many years and have low maintenance costs....
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Too much money is spent on repairing old buildings, instead of repairing old buildings, that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that money should be used to build new offices by demolishing the old ones, rather than repairing them, given that a huge amount of money is spent on repairing old constructions. This essay agrees with that statement because a newly constructed building can be utilized for many years, and it also requires less maintenance....
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Too much money is spent on repairing old buildings, instead of repairing old buildings, that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the old government offices should be demolished and construct new ones, given that the expenditure to repair the old ones is very high. This essay agrees with that statement because newly constructed buildings have a long life, and does not require frequent repairs....
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Some people think that too much money is spent on repairing old buildings,instead of repairing old buildings,that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new ones .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An old structure in the form monuments, towers and temples generally requires huge sums in maintenance in the economy. Some people think spending money for the vintage infrastructure is a waste of money, while others believe that allotting separate funds for the conservation of those precious architectures is relevant. In my opinion, I do not agree with the former proposition and support the segments where the budget of repairing an old building is considered....
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Some people think that too much money is spent on repairing old buildings,instead of repairing old buildings,that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new ones .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Buildings are a part of country's heritage.Some sections of the society opine that instead of spending money on renovating old buildings ,the same should be utilised for grounding them and inturn constructing new structures .I strongly disagree with the above statement evidencing in this essay as to why it is important to restore buildings in their original form....
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Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (IELTS 2, AC)

Many individual claims that sports persons, film stars and singers are being paid an extravagant amount of salaries in recent years. The growing number of advocates thought that it is a waste of money; however, the rest adverse it. Notwithstanding, this disclosure will delve into this viewpoints and subsequently, put forward my own perspective, in turns....
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Many countries spend large amounts of money on preparing competitors in major world sporting events such as the Olympic Games and football World Cup. Instead, this money can be spent on encouraging children to take up sports at a young age.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Investing in sports is an important part of the government’s business to improve the physical fitness of the population, particularly young children. While it is necessary to train a few selected individuals to compete in major world sporting events, the government should do more to provide young people with plenty of fun activities. There are a myriad of benefits to be gained from funding sports participation at grass-root levels and excellence in performance at elite levels....
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Many countries spend large amounts of money on preparing competitors in major world sporting events such as the Olympic Games and football World Cup. Instead, this money can be spent on encouraging children to take up sports at a young age.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A lot of countries spend huge amount of payments on conducting competitions in events such as the Olympic and football world cup games. But, some peoples believe instead they should invest this amount to motivate children to take up sports at a small age. In this essay I would like to express my opinion with suitable example....
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Many countries spend large amounts of money on preparing competitors in major world sporting events such as the Olympic Games and football World Cup. Instead, this money can be spent on encouraging children to take up sports at a young age.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Different countries have different budgets and their government decide to where it will use and how much. Government used their budget in different section such as health care, education, defense, sports etc. Those people who interested in sports and doing some sports activity like cycling, swimming, etc government used their budget on them not on those woh are not interested in sports....
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Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. How far do you agree? What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support the arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Among various professions in the society, the people who are connected with human lives, education are being underpaid; compared to industries like films and CEO’s of multi national companies. In this essay I would like to express, that I do strongly believe people who are into public helath, education are not treated to standards of importance....
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With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Thanks to the advanced technologies, there has been a big improvement in space exploration, in the last two decades. Some people believe that funding for space travel is unworthy. While I concede that there are possible arguments for people’s assumption, I think we will gain more than we lose from space exploration brings to our lives....
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With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Ever since the scientists started interest in the potential life on mars, many of them have been trying to communicate with other planets. A fraction of the scientist holds a notion that it would be dangerous to the earth. This essay would delve into both view points and tries to arrive at a rational conclusion....
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Too much money is spent repairing old buildings. It would be better if this money was used to knock down old buildings and construct new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Renovation of old structures involve, the use of large funds. Many people believe that it is irrelevant repairing them and that they are better off knocked down to make room for the construction of new ones. I completely disagree, however, and will explain why I feel renovating old buildings are important....
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Too much money is spent repairing old buildings. It would be better if this money was used to knock down old buildings and construct new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every country has vast historic buildings which depict the prestigious architecture and history of the nation. A huge cost is incurred generally in maintaining these ancient buildings and it is often argued by some people that it is preferable to demolish these structures and build new ones instead. In my opinion, though refurbishing old buildings involve huge money but, at the same time, construction of new buildings is also extremely vital. The essay will discuss both the views in detail....
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The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that a huge amount of money has been spent on building preservation in many cities. To some extent I agree that governments prioritise the development of new housing and infrastructure, but I would also argue that we do need to restore and preserve old buildings that have a cultural identity....
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The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The adoption of mobile phones is inevitable growing at an alarming rate in the present century. The usage of these electronic gadgets is rising at a faster pace in the 21st century. In addition, cellular phones can be used now for different objectives apart from calling. This essay will explore the benefits and drawbacks of these modern digital phones. I agree, that the money spend on the renovation of primitive structures in the major cities would be better if it is spent on providing new accommodation for poor people and road development....
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