You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inquire about some basic facilities during the one week walking tour in the mountains. I am highly
interest
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interested
to join your group to spend my whole week for relaxation and pleasure for my health. I was desperately looking for tourism companies to arrange
such
custom tours packages with multiple destinations.
However
, I would like to know about the tour package including the final travel date and timings. As well as the exact service charges for the
trip
.
Further I
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Further, I
will appreciate to know more about the food and meal details during our
trip
and number of
peoples
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people
in our group. Apart from
this
, I am seriously concerned about the medical facilities during our mountain
trip
. What kind of medicine should we arrange at our end, or your team will be carrying some general type of medicine which usually required in emergency cases. I am anxious about my physical health, I
’m often facing
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’ve often faced
pain in my heals’
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
after walking more than 2 hours mostly, and
then
I need to take
rest
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a rest
for 5, 10 minutes to become normal. I am expecting 5 to 10 minutes stay every couple of
hours which
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hours, which
is necessarily needed
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are necessarily needed
for my body and feet’s health. I heard very positive reviews about your tourism company and its services, I just get to know many of my friends have visited different places through your company. Especially your
last
trip
to New York has amazing photographs on your Facebook page. Your faithfully, Adil
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