The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The graph illustrates the percentages of
population
aged over 65 in the Add an article
the population
USA
, Japan and Sweden
from 1940 to 2040.
Overall
, the proportion rate
in all three countries showed fluctuation over the period. The USA
and sweden
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Sweden
along with
ups and downs in the rate
displayed steady
rise over the period, Correct article usage
a steady
while
Japan after a constant low rate
showed a dramatic increase and reached the highest rate
among all three countries by the end of the period.
In 1940 the rates of population in Japan, Sweden
and the USA
were between 5% to 10%. From initial till 1960 the proportion of population
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the population
USA
and Sweden
showed a slight lift and continues to increase till 1980. The USA
from 1980 tillSubmitted by mnashwa767 on
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