The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about the number of students who
succeded
in high school competency Correct your spelling
succeed
exams
in 7 different school subjects during 2010-2011. The information categorized
based on subject and gender. It is clear from the graph that both genders passed the foreign languages and Mathematics fairly Add a missing verb
is categorized
equal
during the analysed period.
Change the word
equally
According to
what is shown, the competency exams
in computer science were the highest category where boys succeded at
the most, with a Change preposition
apply
participitation
rate Correct your spelling
participation
reached
56.3% Wrong verb form
reaching
Moreover
, boyes
scored the highest rate in Math Change the capitalization
Boyes
boys
exams
with 48 percentage
between 2010 to 2011. Replace the word
percent
However
, chemistry exams
and geography exams
scored the lowest pass percentage
in boys and girls with 14 percentage
and 30 Replace the word
per cent
percentage
, Replace the word
per cent
respictively
.
Correct your spelling
respectively
To sum up
, we could say that girls accounted the
most success in all high school competency Change preposition
for the
exams
during the period 2010-2011.Submitted by sukaina.ababneh on
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