You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter Give details about the concert. How you won the tickets. Why you decided to give it to your friend.

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Dear Rohan, I hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirit. I am writing

this

letter to offer you

ticket

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to a live concert as I have won two tickets for a show. To your surprise, it is an International Rock Band

that is

going to perform there. The venue is

city

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the city

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stadium and the program will start in

evening

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the evening

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at 7:00

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clock. I have heard it is sponsored by City Youth Club to raise funds for

local

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the local

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charitable

hospital

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. Some native artists would

also

get a chance to display their talent.

Last

week, the Red cross society has organised an environmental fair in our college and there was

the

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painting competition on the theme. Luckily, I have awarded

with

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first

prize and two tickets to a show. From

the

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very early childhood days, I am seeing your passion and dedication for music is going unbound. I know you would

definately

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definitely

like to come along

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with me

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so I am offering you the ticket. I hope it would be a great time together. Yours, Harpreet Kaur

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

180 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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