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These days, many jobs require people to travel and this is disrupting many families. What effects do traveling parents have on their children?

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With globalization and a common business culture encroaching among
/
on every
corner
Suggestion
Corner
 of the world, work related travel is becoming increasingly prevalent.
Although
this
 may be positive for international economies, the effect
this
 trend has on parent child relationships is questionable. It is argued that parents who
/
whom spend excessive amounts of time away from home negatively influence the development of their children.
This
 will be shown by looking amid
/
at the
need
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needy
 children have for both a stable household structure and regular interaction with a positive adult role model. For one,
disruption
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the disruption
 upon
/
of a nuclear family’s household structure can have devastating effects on a child’s educational pursuits.
For example
, a recent American study revealed that children living with single parents were 30% less likely to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 in
/
into university than children living within traditional two parent homes. As
this
 example shows a clear link between parental absence and the lowering of a child’s academic
successes
Suggestion
success
, it is easy to see that children of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 parents are at risk of
underperforming
 in their studies.
Thus
, the drawbacks work related travel has
/
have on parent-child relationships can be seen.
In addition
 to
this
, when their parents travel, children are deprived for
/
from regular interaction with a positive adult role model. Without supervision, young people all
/
greatly too often turn to television for stimulation. The effect
this
 has towards
/
on the development of a child’s mental health can be seen among some Canadian families, where teenaged children show clear signs of lethargy, indifference and late mental maturity.
Thus
, the negative ramifications that result from
/
aboard absent parents are obvious. After looking at the poor influence
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 mothers and fathers have on their offspring, it is clear that parents are best to minimize the amount of time they spend away from their homes.
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