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ou have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.

#ou #credit #card #bank #lists #purchases
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Danielle Waters. I have been a customer
at
Suggestion
of
 your bank, Honest Savings and Loans, for close to seven years. I am writing today because the recent credit card statement I have received from you is completely incorrect. According to the statement, I spent $500 on sporting equipment on August 2nd.
This
 is ridiculous, as I have no interest in sport and have never in my life purchased any sporting goods.
Moreover
, the statement claims I bought
this
 equipment in a shopping centre in Sydney, but I was in Perth at the time. Clearly, someone has gained access to my credit card details and used them to make expensive purchases in my name. Please remove these false charges and any associated interest immediately. Unless you do so, I will be forced to contact the Consumer Protection Bureau. I would
also
 like a new credit card sent out to me as soon as possible. I thank you in advance for dealing with
this
 matter promptly. Yours faithfully, Danielle Waters
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