In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
In many areas of
US
, adolescents are not allowed to move outside if they are not Suggestion
the US
along
with adults after without any others being included or involved
alone
certain time
at Suggestion
a certain time
night
in order to keep them safe and prevent from various kinds of victims and illegal activities.
Teenagers should not be allowed to go out alone at night
for safety and security purposes. This
is because some locality and areas have higher crime rate than others. At particular night
hours, criminals always move in groups to prey juvenile and try to attract them to fulfill
their selfish desires. put in effect
fulfil
In addition
, sex predators try to perform shameful activities such
as rapes to erase the lust in the dark. Furthermore
, some areas are prone to accidents due to the movement of heavy vehicles and teenagers could be victims of such
accident hazards. Thus
, to avoid such
accidents, the movement of youngsters should be limited in late night
hours.
Parents play a vital role in the safety of their children in bad situations. This
is because, most of the anti-social groups operate in the dark and gang parties of these groups try to involve adolescents in illegal activities such
as alcohol consumption and drug selling. If parents would be present along their children, gang would be unable to approach children. In addition
, children are accompanied by adults can enjoy freedom without any fear while moving out of doors. Furthermore
, adolescents would be more informative about bad situation
like curfew and would be more conscious in the future. Suggestion
the bad situation
bad situations
Thus
, parents play the most important role in children’s lives to make more safe and secure.
In conclusion, It is evident that teenagers should not be allowed to go out alone at night
thus
they are accompanied with adults in curfew like situations. If people wants
their children to be Suggestion
want
safe they
should avoid their movement alone outside in Accept comma addition
safe, they
such
conditions during dark and always prefer to go with their youngsters to avoid accidents.Submitted by tulimonika1989 on
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