The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.

The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.
The table depicts the average sales of three different branches of a restaurant in Vancouver. These 3 restaurants are located
at
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Georgia
Street
,
Dunsmuir
street
and
Drake
Street
in Vancouver. The table gives information about the
number
of
transactions
and
it’s
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values,
number
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the number
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of eat-in and Take-Away
transactions
and the most popular
item
at each branch. It is evident from the table that the restaurant at
Dunsmuir
had the highest
number
of
transactions
and
the
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transaction
value. It had 854
transactions
with each
transaction
valued at 10.69 dollars.
While
the restaurant at
Dunsmuir
had 750
transactions
which
are
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is
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more than
the
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Drake
Street’s
390
the
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Dunsmuir
’s 5.61 dollars per
transaction
was less than
the
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Drake
Street’s
transaction
value which was 9.02 dollars. The difference in the
number
of
transactions
via Eat-in and Take-Away at each Branch
were
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almost similar. Among all the provided restaurants the one
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Georgia
Street
and
Drake
Street
had the highest and lowest
number
of
transactions
in both Eat-in and Take-Away. In all the 3 branches the most popular
item
was a
Chicken
item
. Georgia
Street’s
popular
item
was the
Chicken
Burger
while
Dunsmuir
Street
and
Drake
Street’s
famous
item
was
Chicken
Wings and
Chicken
Pasta respectively.
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words street, dunsmuir, drake, number, transactions, item, transaction, street’s, chicken with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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