Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a negative or a positive development?

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction towards the late delivery of the pair of shoes I ordered from your
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Alibaba
website. My 25th wedding anniversary was on the 20th of June 2019 and I requested for these shoes on the 8th of June, 2019.
This
was meant to
complement
say something to someone that expresses praise
compliment
my evening dress on my big day.
However
, it was delivered on the 23rd of June 2019 which is two days after the event. I am highly upset at
such
a displeasing customer service ~being rendered~ by your company, despite my keeping to the 5days notice which was stated on your site.
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me under pressure and caused me
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to look
moody on my photographs
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of
the day.
Nevertheless
, I demand a refund of my money by tomorrow the 25th of June 2019.
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More so
, an apology letter rendered with an explanation
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of
the reason for
this
sort of service because I am a regular customer who patronizes your organization with lots of referrals. I await a positive feedback from you. Yours faithfully, Nina Mark.
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