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You have just come back from a holiday overseas. When you arrived back, you discovered that the airline had lost your suitcase. Write to the Customer Relations department of the airline. In your letter • Explain the situation • Describe the suitcase and its contents • Say what you want the airline to do Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about my lost luggage in flight KLG92 between London to Lagos and how it could be returned to me if found. My suitcase was
on
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in
 the cabin directly above my head as we boarded at 2.00 hours on the 12th June, 2019. I could even remember telling the air hostess not to place another luggage on top it as I had some breakables in it.
However
, on getting to Lagos airport, my bag was nowhere to be found. Immediately I raised a complaint
at
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of
 the lost property department. It’s a black leather suitcase, with ‘DG’ logo inscribed at the left top corner, weighing up to about 20Kg and
it
it is
it's
 20 X 30 cm in size. I had some valuables in the bag which included a brand new Dell Latitude 55b3 laptop, which I just purchased.
In addition
, I had
also
 some new pair of
shirts
trousers that end at or above the knee
shorts
,
Samsung phone charger
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a Samsung phone charger
, a pair of shoe and some money
inside
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in
 the luggage. I would like the airline to thoroughly search for it and kindly return to my home address if found at 9 Bode Thomas, Lagos. Thanks as I await your feedback. Yours faithfully, Emmanuel Atanonsen.
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