In many parts of the world, there is no enough food for everyone. Give causes and solutions to it.

On the citizens of the 21st century there
is put
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has put
is putting
puts
a burden of global problems that need solving. One of them is famine
that is
present in different corners of the world.
This
essay will look at
causes
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the causes
of it
such
as
lack
of facilities,
climate
and war. In the
second
part the essay will show
solutions
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solutions, for
for instance
investment, raising awareness and building a global network.
Lack
of facilities is one of the causes of hunger.
This
is because the
lack
of roads that lead to high transportation costs,
lack
of warehouses to store the yield and
lack
or irrigation systems that would help the farmers to get better results in farming. All of it
lead
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leads
to a small yield
therefore
there is not enough
food
produced for everyone’s demand. In order to tackle
this
problem
more investment must be put in place.
This
can be done through individual parties that would want to help to overcome
this
global issue or by governments that will invest money so the countries became more prosperous. Another cause is the
climate
and the weather that leads to a smaller amount of
food
produced. The natural disasters as floods, tropical storms or
draughts
a shortage of rainfall
droughts
often make farming hard if not
impossible
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impossible, therefore
therefore
no or little
food
is produced.
This
has happened in 2011 in Ethiopia, Somalia and Kenya.
This
problem
can be solved by raising awareness about global warming that influences the rapid
climate
changes and the unusual weather conditions. If people were made aware of what is
happening maybe
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happening, maybe
more of them would be willing to change their behaviour in order to prevent famine happening. Wars are
also
causing the
lack
of
food
in the world. It is because they disrupt farming and
food
production as the fields are often minded and the wells became contaminated
as a result
of
this
the countries cannot provide enough
food
for their citizens.
This
has been a
problem
in Syria for a long time because of the war
that is
happening there. It can be solved by creating a global network where countries would help each other with
food
supplies.
Then
, all of the countries would be enabled to help each other to fight
this
problem
of famine. All in all, there is no enough
food
for everyone because of
lack
of facilities,
climate
and wars;
however
, all of the problems can be solved by investing more in farming, raising awareness and creating a global network that will tackle the
problem
of world hunger. All of it can lead to overcoming the one of
most
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the most
challenging problems we as a society face right now.

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