The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart shows the number of social networking
sites
visited by internet
users
in Canada in 2014 and
in
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2015. We can see from the data that, in general, there was a growing tendency to use more than one site.
Although
just over
one fifth
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of internet
users
did not use any social networking
sites
in either of the years, the proportion in
this
category decreased from 22
percent
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in 2014 to 21
percent
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in 2015. In both years the highest proportion of
users
in any group fell into the ‘One site’ category.
However
,
this
group declined sharply from 36
percent
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in 2014 to 28
percent
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in 2015.
In contrast
, the numbers who reported using two
sites
, three
sites
, four
sites
and five
sites
all grew over the period analysed. In both years the proportion of internet
users
fell as the number of social networking
sites
increased, with only 2
percent
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using five
sites
in 2014 compared to 4
percent
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per cent
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in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sites, users, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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