A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Thank him/her for the invitation Explain why you can not come Ask him about other times to visit

Dear Aleesha, I am writing to tell you that I was pleasantly surprised to receive your invitation. Unfortunately, I would not be able to visit you during

summer

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holidays as I would be extremely busy shifting to my new apartment. Let me explain

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to you

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you

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my situation in detail. Recently, I changed my job and my new office is located far away from my current accommodation.

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, every day I reach home exhausted and I am unable to cook or do anything else. I discussed

this

with my manager and he was kind enough to provide me

an

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with an

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apartment in one of the company’s living facilities. Since

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currently

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it is very difficult for me to move with the hectic work routine, I have decided to relocate during the summer holidays when the workload will be less and I would be able to take a few days

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from work. Could you let me know of another time when you would be free so that I can come and visit you

.

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I think Christmas would be a great time as I would get 10 days off and I believe it would be the same for you.

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, the weather would be great in your city and so we can go

for

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paragliding and cliff diving. Please let me know. Your friend, Noora