It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that due to technological advances we will loose our traditional cultures.
Also
, it is given that we cannot have these together.
This
essay disagrees that because of
technology
we could
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
our
culture
.
Firstly
,
this
essay will address how
technology
has evolved over time and what impact
its
it is
it's
had on our
culture
.
Technology
has grown over with time.
Instead
of cycles, buses and cars have been replaced and telephones have been taken over by smartphones. Our
world
has seen a lot of changes because of
technology
in the past 50 years. A lot of traditional methods of communication have been changed because of
technology
. Yes, it has had an impact on our
lives but
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lives, but
it is unjustified to say that
technology
advances and cultures cannot go hand in hand. In fact, there are many examples where people have shown a variety of
culture
to the
world
with the help of
technology
.
For instance
, lets take social networking sites, these have progressed over the past few years and have billions of users, sites like
youtube
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YouTube
and
instagram
are platforms for people to gain knowledge, learn new things and a source of entertainment. Many
instragrammers
have travel accounts that show the tradition,
culture
and heritage of different countries. Apart from
this
, they have
also
become a stage for raising awareness for any healthcare and human right issues.
Secondly
, it is very important for us to preserve our traditions and
culture
. There are still many people in the
world
who think our
culture
is something that can never be taken away from us.
Also
, there are still a vast majority of people who rather than reading news in front of the screen, prefer to read it in the newspaper.
Culture
is
also
one of the main aspects linked with boosting the tourism of a country. As we know, the tourism industry is extremely important to the government of a particular place not just because
its
it is
it's
a means of earning for the
economy but
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economy, but
it
also
creates awareness of
culture
and shows it to the rest of the
world
.
Lets
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Let's
take,
for example
, hundreds of years ago people used to travel by small boats which required paddling to reach to
islands
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the islands
. It requires a lot of effort and stamina to
paddle but
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paddle, but
nowadays we can reach the same islands by using helicopters or electronic boats.
Thus
, we can say that
technology
has made it easier for us to travel and know more about the
world
. In conclusion, we can say that
technology
does not hamper with our traditional
culture
, but helps expand it by spreading knowledge about the same.
This
essay has shown
evidences
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evidence
that we can have both things together and we need not be scared that our
culture
will be lost.
Also
, we should take more measures on our part to sustain our heritage and values.
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