The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart illustrates the ranking of ten nations which manufactured and utilised electricity in 2014.
It is true that China and US were the two
countries
which manufactured and utilised the most electrical energy. We can also
see that the electricity produced was always higher than the consumption in many countries
except Germany.
Out of ten nations, China was the countries
that ranked first in the electricity power Fix the agreement mistake
country
supplication
and expenditure in the year 2014 with 5398 billion Replace the word
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kWh
provided and 5322 billion kWh
consumed. While
US
ranked Correct article usage
the US
second
with 4099 milliard kWh
of power production and 3866 milliard kWh
of energy consumption.
Looking at the other countries
, we can see that voltage fabrication and use of Russia ranked first. Other remaining countries
like Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea produced and used between 1000 and 400 milliard kWh
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