The bar chart illustrates the percentage of households in owned and rented houses in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of households in owned and rented houses in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of
households
in owned and rented
houses
in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, the
households
in England and Wales stayed in rented accommodation more than stayed in their own
houses
between 1918 and 1961. In 1971, the proportion of
households
in rented and owned
houses
were
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equal. Most
households
stayed in their own house from 1981 to 2011. The
percentage
of
households
in rented
houses
were
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was
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higher than that
owned
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of owned
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houses
and
this
percentage
had decreased steadily,
started
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starting
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from nearly 80% in 1918 and
dropped
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to just below 60% in 1961. In 1971, the
percentage
of both rented and owned
were
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was
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equal at 50%. The
percentage
of
households
in their own house had increased gradually and more than renting
houses
from 1981 to 2011, from 60% in 1981 rose to a peak at just under 70% in 2001.
Then
, it fell to around 65% in 2011.

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