The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts give information about the percentage of
tourists
from different places such
us: Asia
, USA
, Britain and Correct article usage
the USA
Europe
to Australia and German between 1960 and 2010.
Overall
, from 1960 to 2010 there was a decreased
in Australian Change the form of the verb
decrease
visitors
form
Correct your spelling
from
Europe
, USA
and Britain Correct article usage
the USA
por
el contrario Correct your spelling
for
visitors
from Asia
had a significant increase. Germany for its part had a gently
decrease in Change the word
gentle
tourists
from Europe
and USA,
and a rise in Remove the comma
apply
visitors
from Asia
and Europe
.
In 1960 more than 50% of the tourists
in Australia were from Europe
and in 2010 only 10% corresponds to people from this
continent. The majority of visitors
in Australia in 2010 were Asians reaching over 60% of the total of its tourists
.
The majority of tourists
in Germany in 1960 were from Europe
(45%) and only 10% came from Asia
. By 2010 Europeans kept its
40% participation and Correct pronoun usage
their
Asia
had and
increase from 10% to 25%.Correct your spelling
an
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, asia, europe, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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