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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There has been a division in many quarters as to what role a
woman
 should play in a male denominated organisation. While some believe that
both
 uniformed men and women in the armed forces should play equal roles, others think that a
woman
 is not in any way meant for
such
 occupation. In my opinion, I agree with the former assertion that a
woman
 should play a same role as a man in the force for a number of reasons. On the one hand, I believe that in order to prevent inequality,
both
 sexes should have the same responsibilities. Since time immemorial, women have been clamouring for equal rights at work,
therefore
, in order to prevent a situation whereby the female sex feels looked down on or belittled it is essential that they are
both
 awarded equal roles in the force. Whereas,
both
 parties knew what they were in for before applying for the job, there is
therefore
 no need setting aside a special role for a man or
woman
.
For example
, there has been an increasing e
nrollment
of female in the armed forces ever since the authorities ruled for equal work rights for
both
 sexes.
On the other hand
, it is thought that military jobs could be more tasking and demanding for a
woman
.
This
 is because some of the job descriptions of being an army officer sometimes involve going to war and a
woman
 might not have the necessary strength required to carry out
such
 operations. In a situation where a
woman
 is enrolled f
or
Suggestion
in
such
, the probability of failing in
such
 missions would be higher.
For example
, in the year 2000, the Nigerian Police Force enrolled twenty women to lead the war in the Sambisa forest in Kano State. The state recorded a massive failure of the mission because the female soldiers could not bear the long vigorous match to victory.
This
 re-emphasizes the fact that not all jobs are suitable for
both
 sexes. In conclusion,
although
 women might not be able to perform excellently in the armed forces, I believe that in order to prevent inequality,
both
 sexes should be given responsibilities on the par.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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