IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 3.5

A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for three months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: give details of what you know about his company explain your current situation give your answer to the offer and explain why

#friend #work #company #three #months #situation #offer
Dear
Suggestion
Deaf
 Smith, I’m writing
this
 letter to inform about my acceptance of your
company
 job offer of software development. I have visited your office
last
 week when I came to pick-up on that rainy day. The office infrastructure was simply awesome and dedicated cabins for each and every employee was certainly quiet interesting. Even I have gone through the your
company
 website as well, the site was very attractive with its new features of
chatbot
. As you already know about my upcoming release code changes in my
company
 which it has more complexities to deliver the product to the market and I have been working for
this
 product since 3 years.
In addition
 to that, I’m only senior resource for
this
 project and I need to more delightful towards
this
 release. I’m quiet busy with
this
 release, the management team for the rest of 3 months starting from today.
However
, thank you for the offer from your
company
 and probably I will join soon after my delivery of new product launch which was scheduled in mid of
next
 quarter. Best wishes Shareef

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: