You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter: which course you have been applied for why you cannot join the course ask about the possibility of the course in the future Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir or Madam, Thank you very much for giving me the opportunity to study at your college. I was applying for
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and Management program and I am extremely sorry but I would be able to attend at that time. Let me explain my situation in more
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. I had a car accident in which I broke my left leg and right arm, because of these injuries I can't properly write and walk on stairs.
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will cause problems with my notes from your classes. Same as I will need to go on my physiotherapy
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time when I need to attend classes. I would be grateful if you would consider allowing me to move
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date of my course
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some other term. That opportunity
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I got from your college should
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my potential in
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life and professional career. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
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faithfully, Darko Abramovic

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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