Many people say that universities should only be offered to young students with high marks,others say that they should accept people of all ages,even if they did not do well.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People's opinions differ as to whether or not universities invite different
age
groups or only young people according to their marks.While there are some strong arguments against for different
age
people to
study
at university, I steel believe that it would be much more effective to educate like adults or a bit older people. There are several reasons why people might argue that universities should only be offered young adroit students.
Firstly
, there is evidence to support the idea that young generation haven't any kinds of problem with their life
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in
this
age
they would be far from the hustle and bustle of life
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they can pay too much attention their studies.
Also
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after graduating school they haven't job to do in order to get income.
Secondly
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in fact young people have fresh minds
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consequently
they
of them or themselves
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catch information easily
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especially skilful one
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that got good marks at school.They try to get high scores in
this
institution.
This
give
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gives
more opportunities for students to have a bright future. In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that other
age
groups should have a choice to
study
at universities
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,
although
they have had a bad mark in order to achieve their goals.Todays many people realise it is crucial to be educated.
As a result
, they need to continue their
study
to have a steady job which
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supports
people financially.It is true that the university programs are difficult
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but old
age
one has had more experience that can help them in their
study
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studies
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For example
, in our country
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Uzbekistan) many people get opportunities to continue their
study
at universities in order to take certificate. In
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conclusion, studying
only adroit young students at universities have its
advantages but
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advantages, but
I believe that
also
other
age
groups should have a chance to do so.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
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