The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

It is argued

that

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

whether

children

should be granted the freedom to make their own decisions or not.

Although

I agree that they have the right to have options at times, I do not believe that

children

should decide on their own. On the one hand,

children

should absolutely be able to make up their minds in certain matters. The first reason is that having independence in their decisions would foster a sense of

fulfillment

Change the spelling

fulfilment

show examples

which will result in the cultivation of happiness.

For example

, by letting a child choose his/her own birthday present, they will feel joyful and satisfied and appreciate their parents more.

Secondly

,

children

will

also

learn to perceive and deal with their mistakes

from

Change preposition

by

show examples

making their own choices.

Consequently

, they will grow up taking matters

with

Change preposition

apply

show examples

serious

Change the word

seriously

show examples

considerations

Fix the agreement mistake

consideration

show examples

.

On the other hand

, the danger of permitting

children

to determine from a young age must not be underestimated.

Children

’s minds are often not fully developed and they do not possess the knowledge and experience to decide what is best for them. Take choosing a high school,

for instance

, it is an important choice that will affect a child’s whole life to some extent and the decisions should be of parents or guardians to make. Another factor is that giving

children

too much flexibility can lead to ignorance of others’ feelings and benefits.

Such

children

would become selfish and

self-centered

Change the spelling

self-centred

show examples

entering

adulthoods

Fix the agreement mistake

adulthood

show examples

affecting society as a whole. In conclusion, the idea that it is vital for

children

to make their own choices remains a source of controversy. In my opinion,

while

children

taking matters into their own hands can have some benefits, I would argue that

such

freedom should only be granted in certain scenarios.