The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The first graph illustrates information about the
number
of Japanese who visited other countries between 1985 and 1995. The
second
line graph presents more detail about the percentage of tourists to Australia from 1985 to 1994.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in the
amount
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number
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of foreign tourists from
Japan
.
However
,
although
the
number
of visitors to Australia looks proportional to the
number
of people visiting other countries, there are downward trends
in
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apply
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between years and ending years. Between 1985 and 1990,
Japan
saw a considerable increase in the
amount
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number
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of people going out
for
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on
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vacation. The numbers which were around 5
million
in 1985, went up to about 11
million
in 1990.
In contrast
, despite,
Australian
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the Australian
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share going from 2% to just under 5% by 1988, it remarkably declined in 1988 by 1% and increased to 5% by the end of 1989. Notably, Global tourists from
Japan
declined by half
million
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a million
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from the previous year in 1991.
On the other hand
, Australian tourism from
Japan
interestingly increased by around 1% in the same period. After that, the
number
of external visitors increased approximately by 5
million
by the end of 1995, but
Australian
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the Australian
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percentage decreased by 1% between 1993 and 1994.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, japan, million with synonyms.
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