What is the tonnage of fruit produced per month in 2013?

The charts give information regarding the tonnage of fruit produced
in
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a farm per month in 2013, the
fertiliser
used and the monthly
rainfall
in that year. We can see that fruit production rose steadily from just over 2
tonnes
in January to a peak of roughly 4.2
tonnes
by August. Output
then
fell rapidly, declining to around the initial
2 tonne
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mark in December.
However
, looking at
fertiliser
use, we see that
this
seasonal pattern is largely reversed: the most
fertiliser
(just under 1 tonne) was utilised in April, followed by a marked decline to zero in June and July.
Fertiliser
consumption
then
increased slightly in the autumn, rising to a total of around 0.7
tonnes
before dipping to just below 0.5
tonnes
at
year end
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. Regarding
rainfall
,
this
appears to reflect the use of
fertiliser
, with an early high of 16mm in February, falling consistently to 4mm in July, August and September.
Rainfall
then
increased steadily to reach 14mm in December. In summary,
this
farm generally employed the most
fertiliser
at seasons of high
rainfall
, and by
contrast
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it produced the most fruit when both
rainfall
and
fertiliser
use were around their lowest.

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