Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: Q) What are the changes? Q) What are the problems you are facing? Q) what part of the service would you like to change?

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to the changes in the local
bus
services which created discomfort for the people and request you to make us comfortable. Introducing myself, I am residing in Porwal street for five years and I have been using your
bus
services to reach
office
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daily. Recently, I have noticed a few service changes, especially the timings of the
buses
. The
buses
I have been
traveling
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are regular on-time till a few days back.
However
, I have observed that the timings are changed from office hours 9:00 A.M to 9:30 A.M and I could not reach the office at the specified time. Even the number of
buses
to the Kothrud area
also
reduced. I do not have a bike and even cannot afford it.
Hence
, relying on your
bus
services.
Also
, the
bus
stop has been changed and it is a congested area and people feel difficulty to board the
buses
. Kindly see that every change made is feasible to the public.
Finally
, I would suggest you provide a convenient place with less traffic to board the
buses
to avoid accidents. Apart from
this
, kindly increase the number of
buses
in our area to be feasible to reach the destinations early. Yours Faithfully George Thomas
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