The diagram shows the process of making the soft cheese
The given pictorial reveals
that
the five stages from mixing ingredients to Correct word choice
apply
filterlisation
in the production of soft Correct your spelling
fraternisation
cheese
.
Initially
, it is a
vividly apparent that the water and milk Change the article
apply
is
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are
mixing
in the mixer Wrong verb form
mixed
then
, this
mixture is sent from the cooling process
. Before, adding the salt in
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to
this
mixture it is cooled at 5* Celsius
for 2 hours
. In the next
step, the mixture is breakdown through the fermentated
Correct your spelling
fermentation
process
at 35 degree Celsius
for 2 hours
.
In the Fourth Stage, the material is evaporated for 8 hours
at 300* Celsius
. The steam is allowed to escape throughout the outlet. In the last
stage , the material again
cooled at 5 * Add a missing verb
was again
Celsius
for 8 hours
. Finally
, the waste water
is filtered through the bottom outlet and the soft Correct your spelling
wastewater
cheese
is collected in the upper filter.
Overall
, it can be incurred that the process
of making soft cheese
is complicated
Add an article
a complicated
process
and all stages are essential to make the cheese
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