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Do children behave better when they are physical punished or rewarded. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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In today's modern world, computers are needed
everyday
Suggestion
every day
. Around the world, children
use
 computers from the time they are little. It's true that children should have fun when they are young;
however
, in my opinion, a child who knows how to
use
 the
computer
 will be more successful in the future. My reasons for
this
 view are personal, academic and professional. From a personal point of view, computers can help young people to learn more about the world.
For example
, some children
use
 the Internet to find information on different subjects. In
this
 way, they learn to find answers by themselves. By using the
computer
 when they are little, children feel more comfortable around computers. They
also
 know how to
use
 the
computer
 for different reasons. From an academic viewpoint, children have to learn how to
use
this
 new invention.
For instance
, when I was in college, many students used to bring their laptops to class. They used to take notes, do research and share information. They wrote their essays, made presentations and created useful lists. Children who can
use
 the
computer
 when they are young have more confidence than other children. From a professional perspective, the
computer
 is found in every kind of office. Today, employers will still hire people who cannot
use
 computers and give them
computer
 training. But tomorrow, companies
will expect
Suggestion
expected
 people to have these skills already.
As a result
, by encouraging children to
use
 the
computer
 for a short time every day, parents are preparing their children for future jobs. In conclusion, it is clear that computers are now a part of our regular life. Children who can
use
 computers easily and confidently will do better in the future.
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