The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the way in which

coffee

is produced from a farm and the way in which it is made ready for sale.

Overall

, the process consists of eleven stages beginning with

coffee

beans, picking and ending up with the packing of

mixture

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the mixture

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into jars.

Coffee

manufacturing starts with the picking of

coffee

beans. Once the

coffee

beans are picked, they are dried in the sun for some time. After that, they are roasted in a closed container.

Following

this

, they are cooled down rapidly before passing them into a grinder.

Then

they are ground in a machine to produce

powder

Add an article

a powder

the powder

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. In the

stage, they are mixed with hot water to produce a mixture.

This

mixture is

then

strained for

further

freezing in a closed environment.

Then

after that, the frozen liquid is again grounded to form a fine

powder

, the fine ground

powder

is dried in a vacuum to evaporate the remaining water content.

Finally

, the

coffee

powder

is packed into airtight containers for selling in shops.

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4 paragraphs

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