The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the changes in export earnings for a country in different categories from 2015 to 2016, measured in billions of dollars.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that all earning
experienced rises except gems and jewellery, which experienced a moderate drop. The majority Correct your spelling
earnings
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of earning
earning
came from petroleum Correct your spelling
earnings
products
and engineered goods, on the other
hand
agricultural Add the comma(s)
,hand
products
and textiles contributed the lowest income.
The main export was petroleum products
, which went 61 billion
in 2015 and after a year it became around 63 billion
(Correct article usage
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increased
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increase
only
3%).The Change preposition
of only
second
highest earning category was the
engineered goods. In 2015, it was below 60 Correct article usage
apply
billion
, however
in 2016 Add a comma
,however
earning
from Correct your spelling
earnings
the
engineered goods Correct article usage
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had
increased sharply and accounted for around 62 Unnecessary verb
apply
billiob
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billion
dollar
. In a year it rose 8.5% .
Compared to these two exports, other Change to a plural noun
dollars
products
was
much lower. Gems and jewellery , the only export to decrease , went down 5.18% from 43 Change the verb form
were
billion
to 41 billion
. There was very
small change in agricultural Add an article
a very
products
, only 0.81% rose up
from 31 Change preposition
apply
billion
to slightly above 31 billion
. However
, there was a significant change in textiles, it grew up
15.2% from 26 Change preposition
by
billion
to 32 billion
in a yearSubmitted by ali.labib62 on
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