Increasing car usage in many large global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the city centre. To what extent do you agree?

The line graph illustrates the
number
of commuters who
travell
change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
travel
travelled
by underground tubes in a typical day from morning 6 am
to night
during the night of the present day
tonight
10 pm, over a 16 hour time period. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that even though
mornig
the time period between dawn and noon
morning
and evening hours witnessed the highest
number
of travellers, mid day has lower
number
of passengers. Interestingly, both morning and evening 6 ‘o’clock experience the lowest point of rush hour. Looking at the
first
eight hours of the commuting,
travellers
Suggestion
traveller
flow beginning at 6 am at approximately 100 passengers,
then
this
figure continued to grow and hitting its peak
at
Suggestion
in
400 at 8 am. Following
this
, a sudden decline can be seen before it climbs again to nearly 300 commuters in 2 ‘o’clock
aftre
happening at a time subsequent to a reference time
after
noon.
However
, London see the other down fall till 4pm, after which
this
figure rises again back to its other peak point, almost the same
number
of
passenger
Suggestion
passengers
in the morning 6 am. Having reached another high point, the passengers influx begins to slip and end at around 130 in 10 ‘o’clock.
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