Your new neighbours have recently invited you to a party they are holding next Saturday. However, you have other plans on Saturday evening and cannot attend the party. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: · thank them for the invitation · mention what plans you already have · suggest when you can meet them Write at least 150 words.

Dear
Mr.
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Brown, I am writing to thank you for inviting me
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the
party
which you are holding
next
Saturday. It is very kind of you, and I was very excited
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the
party
however
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,
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I won’t be able to come as I have a conference in my office. Let me explain
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more in detail. I have recently switched my job in a very reputed investment banking company. And on
next
Saturday Foreign delegates are coming to my organization for finalizing a deal. I am
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part of that deal. As per my boss instruction, I have to be
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the conference. If we get that project our company turnover would be double. I wanted to be at your home and enjoy the
party
and get to know some of your relatives and friends. Could you let me know any other day after Saturday? Hopefully, we will do that on Sunday and have some quality time together. Please let me know. Wishing you a grand
party
and have fun with your guests. Yours Sincerely Vandana
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