You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: – Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired – Ms in computer science, – Your energy and enthusiasm for the job – Your past experience in a similar position

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Ishan Saverdekar. I am a senior Web Developer and I am writing

this

letter to apply for the position of Assistant Manager for Web Development team, which was advertised in yesterday’s newspaper for Apple’s headquarters located at the Cupertino, California.

To begin

with, my education, I have obtained two Master’s degrees in Computer Science field and I have not only passed them with the highest GPA scored, but

also

I have been hired by a company through on campus placement. Regarding my work experience, I have five plus years experience in IT industry with incremental positions from Intern to as a senior Web Developer.

Moreover

, I have worked with Broadcomm for 2 years, which is working on the same

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and other required technology which are required in your desired candidate. As you can see my dedication and passion toward my career from above mentioned details, I am ready to accept and keen to work in the automation with latest method which is Apple about to launch in the upcoming year.

Thus

, I believe, I am a perfect candidate for

this

position and I look forward to hear from your positive reply. Yours faithfully, Ishan Saverdekar

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

203 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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