You have recently been in a sports centre and noticed some issues in the changing rooms. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the centre and say – What was the problem? – Explain why it is bothering you. – Suggest a possible solution.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I feel the need to bring to your attention an issue I have with the manner other members use the changing room. Allow me to elaborate.

Last

week, after completing my swimming session at your sports

center

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, I came to use the changing rooms. I noticed that the wet towels have been placed all around the place like in locker doors, benches and even on

floor

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. That day I had brought my children’s to use your sauna facilities and I am sure they felt bad about the cleanliness. I am aware that children are not your company's target market, but you have to acknowledge that children’s do visit your

sport

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center

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regularly along with their parents. I trust you can empathize with my situation.

Thus

, I am expecting you to

make

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immediate action by installing

basket

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at the entrance to keep the dirty clothes and display a notice to users about the purpose. I am

also

expecting you to reprimand the staff's working

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changing room for allowing

such

oversight to happen. Your timely attention to

this

matter is needed, (I look forward to

see

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immediate action taken for

this

issue) Gratefully yours, Sankar

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Yours sincerely,

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Best regards,
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

196 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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