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The maps show the developments which took place in the coastal of town Laguna Beach between 1950, 1970 and 1990.

The maps show the developments which took place in the coastal of town Laguna Beach between 1950, 1970 and 1990.
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The maps show the developments which took place in the coastal of town Laguna
Beach
 between 1950, 1970 and 1990. In 1950, the town was
a
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much greener and
enough
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had enough
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 empty spaces with a lot of sand dunes, woodland and
Beach
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a Beach
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 hut. There is
also
 have
narrow
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a narrow
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 road which people use
this
 road for go to
beach
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the beach
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area
 and back from
northern-east
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the northern-east
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 side of
map
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the map
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. After 20 years
town
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the town
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 experienced dramatic changes, in the woodland all trees are cut down and cleared for
caravan
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a caravan
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 park.
Also
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,Also
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 some sand dunes
cleaned
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were cleaned
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due to
building
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the building
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 of Villas. But we can see there
some
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are some
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 good changes
also
,
for
example
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,example
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beach
 huts substituted with big Villas,
road
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and road
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 is expanded for cars. In 1990 there
was
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 enormous changes. Caravan Park replaced with car parks, Villas are changed to three storey Hotel
which
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named “Hotel Laguna”. Near
to
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the
Hotel
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,Hotel
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 we can see
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the new
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new
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newly
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 created Pool
area
.
Furthermore
, the landscape gardens
was
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were
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 established in the
area
 of sand dunes which is located
the
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on the
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 right side of
Hotel
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the Hotel
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. A Surf School was built at the side of
sea
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the sea
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.
Overall
, a comparison of the three maps reveals a change from just
beach
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a beach
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area
 to
mix-usable
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a mix-usable
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 and different services
area
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words beach, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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