The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
As we can see, the graph above describes graduated students of
university
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in Canada during the period between the years
of
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1992 to 2006. In general, we can observe that number of graduates in both genders is
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a
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steeply
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growth
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In addition
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declined relatively from 1996 to about 1999,
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had back to recovery in 2006. In early 1992 we can notice how
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males’ number increased from 70,000
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about 77.000 students in 1995. After that, the rate
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fluctuated from 1995 to 2005, ending up with a sudden surge again. Looking at the graduated females, when it comes to 1992 to 2006 it is noticeable that the rate starts and ends in a sharply climbed.
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the period from 1995 to 1999 the number had a slightly fell down.
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