The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.
Man, through the ages, has undergone many changes from the time when he depicted a herd of mammoths on the walls of his cave to these days when he can create beautiful pictures and even make coffee by use of computer technologies without leaving his
favorite
chair. The 20th Change the spelling
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century
made huge steps in developing computer technologies and reached many goals that made our life
much easier. What should we expect in the 21st Fix the agreement mistake
lives
century
? First of all, I think that the pace of our life will speed up: we will move faster from one place to another, from one continent to another using high speed
jet airplanes. Second of all, I believe that we will be able to do many things that take much time now without leaving our house. Computers will be everywhere including Add a hyphen
high-speed
out
clothes. Many Correct your spelling
our
people
will have chips and mini computers inserted in their heads to hold huge amount
of information and have Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
a
quick access to it. But what will be the most amazing thing in the 21st Remove the article
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century
is the flights to the
outer space and Mars that will be available to all Correct article usage
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people
. Scientists say that Mars has many things similar to the Earth's. Moreover
, they say that with the help of modern technology people
can artificially create conditions that will allow people
to live there on the
constant basis. Correct article usage
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To sum up
, I am sure that many amazing changes will be brought by the 21st century
. Furthermore
, I think that with the help of the
contemporary Correct article usage
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technologies
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technologies,
people
can do many things that were even
difficult to imagine a Rephrase
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century
ago. So, nowadays it is rather difficult and even impossible to imagine all changes
that will happen in the next decades.Correct article usage
the changes
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite